Let me guess, you're a Filipino writer?

Please update this soon!

Honest to God I have no idea what's going on here. The chapters don't blend all to well making the story hard to follow and I've got no clue who the main characters are. You have yet to set the mood of the story or even give us an idea of what you plan to do.

All I'm getting from this is just another Gate thus X fought there. Clean up the formatting, add some sustenance to the story and add something original so we're not seeing the same old shit we see all of this section.

Great story so far!

Under Article 5 of the NATO treaty, an attack on an North American or European nation is an attack on all. US and NATO troops would be deployed into the gate, the U.N. would have no jurisdiction on American soil, let alone the Gate. Beyond that, I'm enjoying the story so far.

Great

It could be better.

Good to see you back! The new chapter you wrote is as great as ever. The time for diplomacy has passed, time to burn the empire and scatter the remains to the ever changing sands of time.

YAY it's back!

Well nice chapter

Loved this chapter...also don’t fuck with the United States.

Been a while man

Nice to have you back

Keep on writing this story, it's great so far, and I think it has some potential, just try to find a balance between more important things and this.

Instead of peace talk, how about full scale invasion? Why do we need to talk to the Roman? What they did in DC is a great insult to all American. Show those bastard who did they messing with. Read: Gate: World at War aka Call of Duty X Gate. This will make you see why Empire don't deserve forgiveness. They don't deserve to be call human. I expect the people should be more angry and want revenge again this Roman Empire.

President: We gonna march through that gate and grind those son of bitches to the ground! To all the family victims. I promise you. We will give them one hell of a freedom! I repeat! We gonna give them Fall of Roman V2!

Mission Breifing
-Find those who were responsible for DC massacre.
-Build a relationship trade with the local.
-Rescue those who got kidnap.
-Free all the slaves.
-Hunt and kill any slave trader, corrupt nobles, imperial bastard, and those who were responsible for DC massecre. All interrogation will be conduct by CIA. Use of tortue is authorized.
-Invade their capital.
-Send expedition team to find resources.
-Launch a satellite into the orbit to mark all map. Try to find the way to build space station and colonized the whole planet.

After reaching Empire capital
General: As you can see, we have destroy 10,000,000 of your troops. I suggest you stand down and surrender. Turn this place into a democracy or face extinction.

That's how the story suppose to be if you want to entertain us. Oh! And one more thing. If you Hardy plan to close the Gate. We gonna nuke her up. Destroy her temple. That's her power source. The gate cannot be close. I repeat. This fantasy world is US greatest asset. Why? Because I just read this fanfic: s/12368372/1/A-Sky-Full-of-Fire.

So, on behalf of the United States Government, let me paraphrase our warning from the last time we were made to use these weapons. If Hardy or any other god wants a war against us, there will be no glorious or honorable combat, there will be no stories or songs or statues. You have witnessed just one atomic bomb; we have many more. If any god attempts to intervene in the affairs of humanity again, we will burn them out of the fucking heavens(and hell).

That's what I expect in the story. Thank you.