Great little fic, I really liked it.

Omg! I could just see the relationship between Tsuna and Reborn!

It’s like Tsuna is some sort of deity. Lol.

Yeah, compared to others, Tsuna’s practically a saint.

omoooo enjoyed it so muchhhh
...dudeeee i cant imagine the loneliness he must have felt for all those years
so thankful he wont be for any longer *wipes tear
so happy for himm yeahhhh i too wished for more but ending on that note is also fine *wink

Enjoyed reading your story!

Oh that scheming chameleon XD

I rather like this, I can see Tsuna being a kind of low key hero that is more words than action. Him having to pay very close attention to what he says; I could easily see him being a lawyer. It makes me think of tricksters and gods by sakurademonalchemist s/10177155/1/Tricksters-and-Gods in a way, tsuna having absolute control of his words would be an really different path towards being a hero, one he could happily stay in the shadows for.

the plot and his actions are contradicting your summary...

I really love this.
Tsuna is so powerful here but the story is still very interesting so far.
Looking forward to read more. Keep updating :)!

Plz chp 4!

Um, so Tsuna mind controlled Reborn and then did something to change his fundamental personality before making him lose his memories? I know Tsuna was trying to be... 'nice' or whatever but Reborn is a hitman with a lot of enemies and so he should actually be cautious of people like the incident with Luche helped him to be.

If you erase something that clearly had a large impact on Reborn then that's something he's lost and he'll never get back. It doesn't matter that Reborn was more cautious of people or that he (rightfully) held hatred for Luche, it still boils down to the fact that Tsuna effectively destroyed a part of him.

Maybe if Reborn was damaging himself over it, maybe if he was to the point of suicide it would make sense and I could let it go but he just seemed to angst over it a little then move on.

I know I'm ranting but I've had people go behind my back and make decisions for me -that I did not want- then pat themselves on the back and act like they have the moral high ground because it was 'for your own good'. It's pretty much the same thing but Reborn has it so, so much worse. Maybe Reborn didn't change that much, maybe he feels lighter, but that decision was still taken from him.

Plus, the fact that you leave it open ended, like they'd be friends after the horrible things Tsuna did to Reborn is just...

Look, I love your writing. Honestly, I'm a die-hard fan, but the idea of this fic pisses me off. I'm going to go read a fluff fic of yours because I think I need happiness right now.

It's very good

Wao. Mind-control is so cool.

This is actually a really interesting concept.

I love stories about characters who are reluctant to have their power. Even more special, I feel a particular connection to stories with a power that allows the character to control other people. I loved how you presented both Tsuna and Reborn in this.

I'm sad that based on the time between now and the last chapter it seems there won't be another one but this is okay by itself. Each chapter was really well done, I thought the way young Tsuna reacted to his power was extremely entertaining.

Good work!