It started off good but quickly devolved into a confusing mess

So Chara is starting to resurface :3 At least this Frisk is no pushover, so in the case Chara tries anything they'll have a harder time controlling Frisk's body.

Wait, did Asriel leave at some point during his childhood for some reason, and then came back. You could've separated the past with the present with horizontal lines so it was noticeable there was a flashbacks. Or made the whole flashback sequence italics to separate it even more because the jump from the present to the past and back was too quick that I had to stop for a few seconds.

Why was Frisk so ominous at the end there? It's like she's expecting something terrifying to happen. But Frisk learning magic, I'm all down for that :D

Where was this story hiding from me? I'm glad to have found it, and love the pic btw.

That makes it boring as all hell FYI. Get to the fucking point already!

Too much cryptic shit and so I am done.

Ohhh, this Frisk of the genocide is finally there ?! It was nice like chapter.

Interestingly, it would be nice to see Frisk of the genocide coming in this chronology, or something like that.

You are completely evil, I hope you realize this, Mew. Still though, I really do love this series so far. I got chills reading parts of it. Great work, to both you and Wuffypants :D

THAT CLIFF DOE!

Poor Asriel, he's been having a REALLY rough time. I mean, think about it. He was stuck in a soulless Groundhog Day for god knows how long. Think about how much EXP you need to increase LV. To go from 1 to 2, you need 10 EXP. But from 19 to 20 you need 49,999. And in the Neutral Ending we see his EXP at 9,999. Implying he reached the maximum readout and surpassed it. He must've been looping for millennia. That's gonna leave a mark.

Aaaand introducing Chara. Wonder how you're going to have her: as the player who did genocide, the narrator who watched it happen and only later participated it, some amalgam of the two, something else, etc. It's definitely scary. In the genocide ending Chara is so powerful she literally destroys the entire universe. Here's hoping she doesn't have any of that power left...

Okay this is bothering me, what in the WORLD is 'Pwqa'?

I love this so far...So any ships? If so, which ones? (I am oblivious, so I have no idea if you told us or not...sorry) and yes healing magic and Frisk go hand in hand...now on to more serious matters concerning Chara. Is she going to be reformed? Or stay demonic and be defeated? Or has Frisk not met her yet? If that's the case, will Frisk meet her/him/them?

This is amazing! Keep it up. :D