I love this. Maze’s devotion over Trixie is clear and I love how she’s not hiding how much she hates Chloe. And I think Trix will be happy to spend the night again, especially if Maze is there. XD

I’m loving this so far! Haven’t found a decent story that involves everyone, including Maze and Trix, in a while. And I know Chloe is worried for Trixie’s safety, but I don’t think she realizes how much Maze actually likes and is probably protective of Trixie. I guarantee you that if Malcolm comes to hurt Trixie, Maze wouldn’t hesitate to make sure she was safe. (neither would Lucifer)

Like in the first season, when he kidnapped her. I bet you I’d Maze had known, she would have been right there with Lucifer when he came for Malcolm.

Btw, love how you had her find out! This storyline is so much more interesting with Chloe knowing, and all the details being revealed sooner. Very original, nice job! :)

Love the story line. Am working my way through the series so far. Also I love the idea of using the classic Eagles songs to help drive the story line and the story title. I'm waiting to see the next one in the series be titled either Desperado, Get Over It, Life in the Fast Lane, One of these Nights or Witchy Woman.

Not my preference re final twists n turns.

So delighted this evolved into more than 2 chapters!

SPOILER RE CHAPTERI am reading this story for the first timeI thought her Dad n then nopethen it’s gotta be. Might be an advantage of reading this as a bookchapter to chapter no long waits.

Wonderful date night!

I'm really enjoying this story. Thanks!

"He was stood in the hallway"

It should be the gerund

"He was standing..."

Or get rid of was:

"He stood in..."

I've never seen this mistake anywhere except fanfiction and only with stood and sat instead of standing and sitting. I read it's a UK thing.

You would never do the same thing with "run" or "jump" for example:

"He was ran across the street when the car hit him"
"He was jumped over the gap"

both sound ridiculous

"He was running..."
"He was jumping..."
or
"He ran..."
"He jumped..."

Those darn jackets are distracting!

WOW! Great story.

I just hope it's something taste, hehe

Well at least Dan is not being as douche-y anymore

Alive please, I never wish anyone dead.

I love how quickly you thickened the plot!