I really enjoyed this, it contained just the right amount of darkness while still remaining romantic; Rin's "Give in to me" scene, in particular, was captivating, to say the least. Amaimon offering his 'help' at the end was a surprise, I can only imagine the punishment he incurred after so dramatically hindering Mephisto's plans.

This story was very interesting and it was wonderful to read. Well done!

Great story, I loved it all the way through.

Oh my God! So beautiful! Thank you.. That was such a wonderful story... I loved it so much! I almost thought that they were dead there at the end, and Amaimon did that so they could somehow escape that life together because Rin was dead. Anyway! I had a tear in my eye reading that. So splended. Maybe a sequel...? Lol. Jk. You do what you want, but that would be awesome. Anyway. Thank you for that awesome romantic adventure!

EXCUSE ME! EXCUUUUUSSSSSEEEE MEEEE! WHAT THE HELL WAS THAT?! IT STARTED OUT SO- SO- DARKLY SWEET AND NOW THIS?! WTF?! I mean, I get it... He saved her again... But can he be certain that he did...? Why?! He better come back! You better bring him back somehow! Magnificent chapter. Please update soon!

Ohhwweee s#!t. So achingly beautiful and depressing.

Don't say that in your author's note! WTF?! This is supposed to work out for them! Death to Mephisto or whoever stands in their way, damnit! Or just have Shura run away and elope with Yukio so that Rin and Shiemi can finally be together!Such a phenomenal chapter, though... So horribly painful, but beautiful, nonetheless.

Oh no.. Ohnoohnoohno! Poor Rin!

That's sad... But at least it's been cleared up fpr Yukio.

Spendid chapter! But wait, wasn't this story originally rated 'M'? I could have sworn... Or was that another story I'm thinking about? Haha, I don't know. My brain is so scrambled. Ha. Well, anyway! I loved this SO much! My heart was racing the whole time! I was like, "oh my gosh, they're going to meet up again! FINALLY!" And I was just so excited!

Oh my gosh! It's been so long! Magnificent chapter! I can't help but wonder if the girls actually do know Rin with what reactions they had... Hmm... Things to find out in the next chapter, I guess! In which I can just head straight to. Haha.

Oh my god oh my god! How the plot is thickening!
Anyway, i dont really mind waiting a while for long, well-written chapters, instead of chops with grammatical mistakes. So take your time, because your story is worth waiting. And everyone has a life outside the fandom. Now ti the story. Your writing is as splendid as always, with the right amount oft description, not to spoil the action. The only thing that I noticed is the constant back and forth between the POVs. This is a little confusing, although i know that you want to show the inner thoughts of all characters. A small indicator before the change of perspective would be nice.
So, that's all. Hope to read a wonderful chapters again.

It's a spectacular chapter ! See Shiemi's reaction, Rin's broken heart (which is so cute in your fic) and the cruelty of King Mephisto ... His story I love and I look forward to every update because I love the way he manages to convey the feelings Of the characters that maintain their personality. I also liked the idea that Amaimon behaved like a real older brother giving him the best advice ... maybe so Rin can press for Mephisto to stop being a pain in the ass and let him make his life with Shiemi. I am intrigued by the story of chan and know how the fairy tale ends. I love his story and please continue and demand his inspirational muses because I have finally found a ship RinxShiemi that I love (and because I like his Shiemi more than the original, that is putting in the friendzone to Rin that is a bonbon of chocolate).

LoL those notes at the end wow I can't wait to see what happens to my little ships next keep up the good work RinShi 4ever.

Wow, a relatively short chapter, but so much happened! Well, this certainly made things more awkward, but more interesting too. Your writing is good, splendid narrative and nice description. I wonder how you shall untie this bundle of events and feelings(if you plan to, that is). Good luck with the next chapter(s), hope to read the next part soon.