| Reviews for A Love To Unfold |
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   luvnanofate chapter 1 . 9/19/2018 A great story. You captured them just right I think. Thanks so much for an enjoyable read. |
| turtleyjohn chapter 1 . 7/5/2018 Lil auto correct when Coco was first touching Velvet's ears, you sat "eats". |
| sacke110 chapter 1 . 4/9/2018 This is beautiful! Truly enjoyed reading this. So adorable! Thank you for writing this! |
| Tamatoa chapter 1 . 1/16/2018 This is such a beautiful story. |
| kirigayahaseo701 chapter 1 . 6/20/2017 SO GODAMNED GOOD! YEAH! |
| NatNL chapter 1 . 5/13/2017 This is actually the cutest thing I have ever read. Thank you. |
| Army of Grimm chapter 1 . 6/22/2016 why is this so freAKING CUTE |
| EndlessChains chapter 1 . 6/9/2016 A well done story. Greatly done on interpreting the mechanics of Team CFVY and how they started as first years. Very descriptive of their personalities as well as how Coco tried to be a good team leader as well. Velvet's situation was well done as it expressed the horrors that the Faunus went through. It was endearing to read how they expressed their feelings for one another as well as how Coco and Velvet interacted with one another. It was an interesting and amusing story to read. Really liked how Coco tended to Velvet's ears. Thank you. Keep up the good work. |
| Breacher89 chapter 1 . 5/18/2016 Absolutely loved this one shot! Very well written with good characterisation and a dash of fluff. |
| mini7498 chapter 1 . 4/26/2016 Awww! They're so cuuuuuuuute~ eeep! (That was me fangirling) |
| ArcFell chapter 1 . 4/18/2016 Aaaaannnddddd... Another punch to the feels. I'm home sick today, and I decided to read the backlog of your work I have yet to read, so expect more reviews. |
| StarcallerPhoenix chapter 1 . 4/14/2016 Reading this in the middle of campus might've been a mistake because it was so adorable that I was just goofily grinning at my laptop for most of the story, but I have no regrets. |
| Ryulord1111 chapter 1 . 4/12/2016 This is a lovely exploration into Team CFVY's dynamic, and for Coco and Velvet in particular. I also liked the holo-grimm idea, since Beacon must have something for the teams to practice on before their real missions, right? So it seemed plausible, and pretty cool to! |
| Tear of Light chapter 1 . 4/12/2016 This was a lovely read. Thank you for this. :) |
| Aust Sakura Kyzor chapter 1 . 4/12/2016 Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhh! The cuteness! I... can't... -dies- I mean... I'm not at all negative towards your other works, but this is hands down the most believable amd adorable relationship you have ever written. And you can only get better, so you will soon reach Writervana and become the ultimate author :3c Also this is canon now. So if you'll excuse me, I need to go to Austin and break a few kneecaps... |
