Nice Interlude. I don't think Melisandre joins Stannis this early on, perhaps she waits and prepares or perhaps I hope it is who I think it is. Anyway I couldn't help but notice that this fic has been updated on average once every two months. I hope you gain interest in it and update a bit faster. There is a good amount of following.

Hot scene. Valyria will be interesting to explore. Wonder if dragons will be a part it. The messenger doesn't have Valyrian blood but he might have some dragon bonding power from his past life that I don't know.

Excellent chapter. It seems well structured and planned so far and I hope it remains that way. The imagery of thousands of Unsullied killing themselves and rising again was phenomenal.

Wow Summer Isles captured and the Messenger moves to slaver's bay. So the different gods are real and will have to be defeated somehow. Interesting. Love the occasional smut. Wonder what beauties in Westeros will be lucky enough to join the messenger's harem. I was wondering about Euron. His quest for power and the supernatural would put him in the path of the messenger though he is young at the time. Waiting for the three eyed raven to show up. Would also love your take on the long night and the walkers.

Asoiaf fic exploring religion and magic? Hell yeah!

Please update soon

Please update

nice bioshock quote. I really enjoy all the different game references.

Have you dropped Spy Games?
I'm a new reader of the vali series

—"Arthur lost his mind in rage when he found out that Lyanna gave birth to a girl instead of the boy Rhaegar thought he was promised"

...except the whole point of getting Lyanna pregnant was clearly to get his Visenya, the third head of the dragon. The idea that ARTHUR, of all people, would get upset at it being a girl is just utterly ridiculous.

Can you update your star wars and one piece si storys please there so good.

Jerk, jerk.. plot? Why bother! jerk, tug, jerk Pussy!

Man what a meaningless chapter :( at least add 2k words to have Vali do at least something in this chapter so it didn't feel so much a meaningless piece

niceu niceeeeuuuuu

maupayyyyy yeeeeeeyy