Reviews for Ashes |
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SlayerOfTears chapter 1 . 5/8/2016 This is good, actually. Surprisingly good. Yang is pretty damn violent, easily pushed to anger, and in some way, I could see this happening. The narrative definitely fits too, and you made a good call by not using names, helps the flow and imagination. |
KnightSpark chapter 1 . 4/14/2016 I'm surprised there isn't more of this. |
DragonBox94 chapter 1 . 4/14/2016 This is good. Sad, but good. |