Reviews for To Love Tsu |
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LegendaryMob chapter 3 . 7/7 Dropped, could barely read it without being induced with headache. Grammar and spelling could use a Lot of work and the opening author notes took too much space even if it's barely necessary. Saw your recent fic and despite the year gaps you barely improved your grammar and spelling. |
Ak-Jaidyn chapter 23 . 1/31 plz make more chapters |
Diobrando44 chapter 5 . 1/27 is our fucking guy pure child hearted |
edricoft chapter 23 . 10/29/2019 pls more update |
Guest chapter 23 . 5/1/2019 when the next chapter |
ExtraterrestrialFlyingCat chapter 3 . 3/4/2019 please edit this chapter a lot of grammatical error can be seen |
AcidESP chapter 23 . 7/14/2018 I love the story, I hope you continue, a greeting, we read it, bye bye! |
alaude hibari chapter 21 . 4/18/2018 I'm not giving up of you updating this chapter. |
alaude hibari chapter 23 . 3/8/2018 it's been 4 months now where have you've been. |
alaude hibari chapter 23 . 12/30/2017 update please! |
MathiasNightlord01 chapter 3 . 10/28/2017 You need a beta reader badly. The scenes were good but I cringed because of the spelling and grammar errors making it very hard to read. Beta should look over these chapters ASAP |
hezi69 chapter 12 . 10/6/2017 does everyone hate rito that much?poor guy the girls are the problem not rito |
Adragonoid75 chapter 1 . 7/13/2017 Aww man, it's been a LONG time since I last reviewed this story I'm truly sorry for that My review for this chapter is, the chapter, plot and characters are great, but the grammar has slightly deteriorated/worsen Both can be fixed with practice so overall, good job and I can't wait for next chapter. |
ReolChi chapter 4 . 7/12/2017 Is this story still alive? I'm still waiting |
Dark 7 Thunder chapter 23 . 7/6/2017 Nice keep it up. |