That kingdom has an unfortunate name.

3/4 done and its getting real. the drama part was gdtting a bit tedious , but that might have been since the missing each other plot is not something thats suposed to make us feel goid, but give a bigger pay off. looking forward to the finale . been a great ride!

Halfway pointish and i wanted to do a quick review before i lose my toughts, ill do a full one once i reach the end.

I am enjoying your Story, but in this first half, your teaser opener made me feel dread. i think thats the point of it, but it made me really scared of reading your story, made me, not read your story at times.

If that was your goal, it worked really well, and it made the expierience diffrent. still how will this story go

Congratulations!

Not a particularly good ending in my opinion. It should have been a showdown between Marco and Tom and Toffe

Why does ludo have to be the one to change his appearance? Toffee seems like he would be far more competant

Hey!
First, i have to say that I'm from Poland, so i can't speak English very well.
Do you know what is Wattpad?
Because i found on Polish Wattpad a story, that is the same like yours, but translated info Polish. It has many
mistakes and I wrote to the author, he said that he has your permission, but i don't believe him.
It's called: "Star vs Siły Zła: - Moja Gwiazda" (it means: Star vs the forces od evil: - My Star).
If you want to do something or just tell him to stop, you can write back to me what do you want to tell him, I will translate it properly into polish.
I know that you wrote this story like a year ago, and you maybe won't event answer, than I will tell him to stop, or something.
I hope you'll write back :D

I reread this entire thing today.

YOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO nice story im also a chemistry major

Daaaayummmnn. The preview

First off i'd like to say this story captivated me, i'd go to work but on my mind was. "What happens next?" This fanfic really kept me wanting more and the author delivered it, yes there were a few typos, but this was an amazing story and i'm going to check out the sequel. Again JolleIQ you hit it out of the park on this one. One thing I was expecting my Tom to be using the mirror but it wasn't the case, you fooled me and I think that twist really set fire to it. Again amazing job and I hope to see more from you.

Why the heck was I imagining a hellhound as a giant red CAT on fire?

This is one of the best fanfictions I have ever read. Not just Starco, but all of the fanfics I have read. You kept with the style of the show and didn't divulge from the characters personalities much. It's hard finding authors who do that. I can't even do it! So, I just want to say thank you for writing your fanfic. If you hadn't, the world would be less off for it.

I guess Marco isn't the safe kid anymore. XD

Wow, they really went all out on Star's party, didn't they?