The betrayal of villains is something i find fascinating.

You have properly mentioned Mahapadma. I am an Indian and an Hindu. In my childhood, my grandmother used to tell stories about Narakas and I couldn't sleep at night. (Now she tells story about marriages)

nice fic, but should have been seperated into different fics after the end of empire revolution arc

Holding a promise you made as a teenager over the lives of hundreds of people is not in any way moral or honerable. It just makes you a monster who uses an excuse to pretend to be human. He was under no compulsion to hold his promise, which means that he wasn't someone stuck on the wrong side, he was someone who chose murdering others and pretended to care. He was not, in any way, a sympathetic character. In fact, he almost totally fits the mold of a true Gary Stu. He is given power far beyond anything reasonable:
Some random surgeons were able to make him the equal of an animate Teigu, something that not even the guy with the Teigu FOR ENHANCEMENT SURGERY could do.
He can use his trump card multiple times, just by pulling the trigger longer.
His Teigu's "weakness" never affects his fights in any way whatsoever.
The other characters decide that _HOLDING TO A PROMISE_ is enough to justify all the murder he's done, and the fact that he personally captured one of their dear friends and handed her over to be tortured to death.
He's written to have had trouble with said poor girl, and yet when he has to fight Arthur, he can now somehow fight at his level.
During his fight with Arthur, somehow Arthur doesn't just dodge out of the way of his Trump Card.

To summarize: He was inconsistently op, and was totally unsympathetic, and yet was treated sympathetically by hardened killers.
So, good riddance. To the character and this story.

:3

Where do I find the wiki?

Mann selena death hit me hard I liked her character and tatsumis family is just expanding and I love it , also you should make a part three to this story

pls. no zombie Korume!

KILL the bitch!

Oh come one not Mine too, first Kurome, now this, damn what are George R.R. Martin's son or student!? :(

This really made me cry

Before I read this I want to say one thing. YOU BETTER NOT LET TATSUMI DIE!

I loved this story I'm sad it's over completely

Loved the first half of the story but could not get attached to the characters of the second half like I did with the first half

Binge Reading Complete: 64-75 (Before every thing I wanna say, most of the chapters I noticed you wrote "hiss" instead of "his" which confused me couple of times I though they were hissing like snakes.)
Now onto the review:(Does this story still counts as an Angst ?)

That was one HELL of a ride DAAAAAAAAAAAAAAMN I still remember the time I started reading this when there was only 2 chapters... I feel old.

I still kinda wish that Lucena was a man IDK dem having that kid gives me mixed feelings. Just can't explain.

When you said you originally planned to make Taiyiang a good guy, I was hoping you would actually would, because that would make a place for a potential "Badass Granpa" character in the story like Whitebeard or Yamamoto Genryuusai. I also noticed that you even made his wiki page thinking you would make him a good guy.

However I still did NOT forgave neither Meppy nor Hikari, WHY did they have to go and bring back Garmr. Didn't Mephisto had more usefull allies from the time of the great war ? or were all of them dead ? I'm still salty about Selena. Damn I'm having flashbacks from the time with Run and Bols.

But that Valkyrie form of Lucena was worth reading.

You're really having fun with these names don't you? Pyrrha, Electrichika... really ? Also Tyrant's design... why does he have a top-hat again ?

You're one of the few writers of an AGK story(that I read) that did not abandoned the story and even write a sequel to I'm glad I found this story in this site.

To think this story is only a year old, with 75 chapters, really shows how much you wanted to bring out another chapter for the readers. You're a great author.
I probably have more to say but I can't remember them right now, so I can only say, this was a brilliant story and I had fun in every chapter of this. Chaos OUT!