Ooh now I see what you mean by the angst in the Alices and Oswald's relationship! I love it, a lot! You captured well the difference between the twins' relationships with Oswald, and how Alyss is uncomfortable because Oswald looks at her while remembering her mother. And it's quite symbolic, because in Japanese, Alice copies perfectly Oswald's speech and Alyss has a very close one to Lacie's own, and just now I find this parallel absolutely brilliant. Alice being the stable one of the sisters and Alyss being the lost, tragic one only serves to further establish it and I love it. I usually live for family relationships too, although the focus in PH was so much more on friendships and most families were bad, I have forgotten how to appreciate them.

I truly love this, i need more stories about Alyss. She always seems so lonely and there isn't so many fics about her that interpretate her feelings in the Abyss but you did it in a magnificent way, all of this is perfect asdf thank you for this ::DD

This definitely gave me a deeper understanding of Alyss than before when I hardly paid attention to her. I like this one. Good work!