I love the fix, can't wait for the next chapter.

Oh no...plz oh god no... it can't be...

IT'S A TRAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAP!

its not even funny how bad natsus luck is

not gonna lie pretty bad in terms of characters i know i can't do better but you made vergil op af and natsu was pretty weak

Your OC's suck. They are ridiculously overpowered, and honestly irritating to read about. Another thing is what was supposed to be the main character has gotten the least amount of "screen time" I was looking forward to this fanfic but I'm pretty dissapointed.

More!

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA HILARIOUS!

Told you 30 wouldn't happen till the next chapter.

I'm still confused on the plot (even though we have over 1000 PMs (with 800 of them being me asking for a better explanation)). So is M the real villain or R?

Also didn't we agree that I'd beta this? What happened to sending me the chapter?

I'm guessing English isn't your first language.

I have no ideal of whats going on anymore

I thought it was a pretty interesting chapter and I like the two team names, MARS and VENM. I just have two questions;
1. Is Aki Matsuhide the faunus archer from last chapter
2. Where did the A come from in MARS?

KO awesome chapter, Natsu and everyone became teams and will probably do well to get along with each other to fight a commen enemy.

Loved the chapter. Just one question, why did you give Vergil Blake's last name?

Will more fairy tail characters show up and how strong will Natsu be by the end of this story?(I ship NatsuxErza)

Well it's because they're OC that they were able to become team leaders. You made them that way.

Hope you do something like Natsu being the weakest member of his (insanely powerful) team and slowly becomes the strongest.

This honestly took an hour and 9 minutes to read. So I'd suggest quicker updates with fewer words.

Hope Mary gets nicer, or at least Ruby gets even with her hitting her.