Ash you're in love with my baby girl? Yes

Wow Calem you aren't so bad after all. I give you permission to socialize with my baby girl.
Serena: Aunty! Stop embarrassing me

Me:Oh no CAMEL! *dials phone *Hello I need a f*** ton of buses please!
Other Amourshipper:Why do you need so many buses
Me :Camel
OA:I understand. Oi you get a f***ton of buses right now
Me:thank you. Camel won't hurt my second baby

I can't wait for the next chapter. It will be hilarious!
And also, Ash you are way too jealous for someone so dense

pretty good

amourshipping is canon by the writers so two words: Screw you.

The ending was adorable.

rereading some nostalgic memories

this story was so good that no amount of words can describe never read a better story in my life .

Is this from atla? Lmao

I am yet writing another review...!
Because I am loving it. Cilan he has returned and you have carved out his role very well. Well if you continue to write and have a thing in mind and would like you to suggest to write in more about Olympia Diantha Steven. You can also introduce Misty and other Pokegirls. Well this would become hectic and I will surely like you to go with your flow.
But still I loved the part...!
Keep Writing

Dear Writer,
I was very much surprised by your writing skills. They are so realistic and seem to be part of the anime itself.I wish they were...! I am really mesmerized by your style of writing and I am a huge fan of yours. I am not a good critic and I don't feel so but really I rave for your writing.I read that the on shots have only 19 chapters but it think you can continue... Or atlest create plots and episodes before Ash losing to Alain. I will be grateful to read them. I have started reading your fanfic just yesterday and have finished 4 parts.
BTW you can write more. Don't mind word limit because for readers like me word limit is not what matters but beautiful narration and quality.
I wish you the best future in writing.

Reader
Omkar

I really git into the story and this chapter made me cry. This was an amazung story and u hope ti see motr fron you.

it was a good fanfic.i think you should continue the story

This is a really good fanfiction. It has some flaws but everything has its flaws. But anyway the characters have a nice personality’s ( yes I know the characters at based on Pokémon xy and xyz ) the story is unique to actually make it seem like it could be an episode of the Anime. Another thing is that past friends/ dawn, and cilan occur in the fanfiction. I would give it a (7/10)