Love love love this!

Holy cow, that was everything I didn’t know I needed! Spanish speaking Jellal for the sexy win!

aww i wish there was more Jelu stories to read.

I like this chapter.

I like this chapter and this story seems Interesting.

Oh my gosh! You so need to continue this. Please! I was smiling the whole time I was reading this and I can just feel the want, the need and the something more (love?) between them. And I'm so liking Spanish Jellal. I hope that more will come out of this because this is just so good. Probably one of the best JeLu that I have read. I hope that you'll continue writing this. Have a wonderful day. And thank you so much for writing this and sharing thus wonderful story with us.

Wish there was more. Need more jelu

So beautiful... had me sighing and squealing like a little girl. Loved it!

i want a third piece. heck maybe even a 4th piece with a kid for them. the way u wrote them..man it has me wishing for the future. this was just sigh worthy.

Holy crap... I think JeLu is my new favourite crackship!

I think I'm in love with your version of JeLu. I really hope that you'll continue their story. I want to see how their relationship will progress. And you're right, Spanish Jellal should really be official. It was one hell of a read for me. Couldn't stop the smiles and squeals. Thank you for this wonderful story. Couldn't get enough.

Please update! I’m kinda looking forward to the rest of both the guilds reactions when they find out about LucyJellal! Like the short-story and the writing style is amazing!

I think this needs to be a full story! It's so good! It feels like such a cliff hanger at the end to me. I'm honestly falling more for this pairing, especially after this .

Your writing style is just amazing. It probably sounds kind of sad, but this is the best damn shortstory about how tangible and real emotions ARE I've ever read (and I've been here for a few years ;) ). So even though I don't have an account, I really want to thank you for the experience and I truly hope I get to write something even a quarter as good someday. Please continue sharing your ideas and your amazing way with words. Thank you very much!

Update Please