This was lovely you know. It was kind of a sad ending with what Sasuke said to Naruto at the end but I get it. and it was kind of weird for Sasuke to say only his family seen that Sasuke before aside from Naruto. I was only thinking I hope not because that would be sick then I thought you were talking about affection and love that made me say oh. But good job.

If only they could be together for real ::_::

I liked the idea and all, but for me who is into the goth culture, there was something that urked me. The song choices you listed would never be played at a goth club. I suggest that you may want to research music that fits the club genre for future stories.
Other than that, kudos.

I really liked this one shot, it was cute and smexy at the same time. If you've got more keep'em coming! :)

They are not gay. Kill yourself, fag.