Good fic

OH MY GOD!
O H . . . M Y . . . G O D . . .
a perfect fic is prefect (i think that's the right saying - since English is not my 1st language)
KUDOS!

wonderful, wonderful and exciting i was aroused myself thank you

Wow girl, hot stuff chapter! You're a great writer 3

Well, I tried to be lazy. Fanfiction made me sign in. Loved this chapter even more than number two.

Hi. Too lazy to sign in, this is from kidders. Really love this story. You write Waige really well. Your prose and chacterization mesh perfectly. An orchestra with you as the conductor. The only minor thing I noticed was a few areas being comma-lite. Otherwise, five stars all the way. And with Walter, I'm thinking not Vesuvius, more like Krakatoa. Keep up the great work!

I love it, I think is very well adapter to the personalities of Scorpion character.

Excellent job.

Wow! I just loved this chapter and whole story! Thank you for taking the time to write this!

you lied. you won't ever write emison again. sad because mermaid and emison helped came out to people and accept myself

Wow. That was one of the best Sex scenes I've ever read. I felt like I was there. Yup I just heard how creepy that sounded. Lol! What I meant to say was that it was very well detailed. I know they can't go into detail like that on the show but I imagine this is exactly how Walter would be and how Paige would handle him. The same way she handles him in every other situation. She is patient when needed and guides him. The way you wrote this perfectly reflected how much and how deeply they love each other. I think about the intensity of their looks thorough out the show, even from the beginning to the Crazy Train episode. This matches and exceeded that intensity. This was making love. It was perfect. Well done

I appreciate your commitment to lovely long descriptive chapters. I greatly enjoyed reading this. I thank you for including the ferret and sweater bits too!

this was great... I love your fics ... keep

I loved every word. Great job.

This is so fantastic.

I loved it! I love everything you write, please keep doing the amazing job!