Reviews for Grains of Sand
oi770 chapter 10 . 2/3/2018
More! More! Please?
akaviri katana chapter 10 . 12/27/2017
Love this! Pls do a part two or sequel!
kasraya chapter 10 . 12/10/2017
fucking love it!
RheasHelm chapter 10 . 10/13/2017
I have my doubts that Miranda will allow Shepard to go on "vacation", so it'll be interesting to see what comes next.
Mangahero18 chapter 9 . 9/9/2017
Great stuff.
tgreatblueberry chapter 10 . 8/21/2017
oh my gosh it's baaaack! I don't know how you do it, but the dialogue is spot-on and I'm really looking forward to seeing how much Shepard acts differently with this new squad. What an awesome take on what could have been instead. I wonder if she'll still eventually see her old crew?

And author, if you read this, the cp Harrington site doesn't show up when I put it in the browser! Oh no! Am I missing something? I would LOVE to see your non-ME writing! You're fantastic.
Kel Xahu chapter 10 . 8/21/2017
ITS ALIVE!
Glad to see this popped up. You've done too well with it to let it fizzle out just yet. :P

Its good Shepard's lack of knowledge about any kind of afterlife was not a cop-out, but she was simply on hold. It leaves the mystery and fear of death in tact to be over come later. Also, Shepard doesn't have any paradise in her head she might be distracted by in the events to come.
Speaking of events to come, even if we know most of the Reaper war down the line, what happens before then looks quite different for now. I'm sure other besides me are waiting with anticipation.

Keep up the awesome, AP, and stay snazzy!
AprDon chapter 9 . 7/26/2017
Cliffhanger... oh...more, please. Excellent! And original!
brittypearl chapter 9 . 1/17/2017
This is so good! Loving it. So glad garrus finally knows. I mean no matter how much someone resembles a dead person you're not going to assume resurrection so I'm glad you took your time. Looking forward to the next update. Thanks!
RheasHelm chapter 9 . 12/7/2016
What a dramatic exit for Vakarian. Didn't know he was such an actor.
The "prostitute joke" was hilarious. :)
ReignitedN7 chapter 8 . 11/26/2016
Oh what a wonderfully refreshing Garrus/Shepard story! I love how this is going and I hope you keep it up!
LMU chapter 9 . 11/20/2016
too lazy to log in
I'm so glad you updated!
This chapter was great. Glad garrus and his team is alive and kicking
Looking forward to the next chapter. Shep has some explaining to do ;)
Kel chapter 9 . 11/20/2016
Somehow I don't think the Asari would let themselves get killed in a shit-can. If she is Tela Vasir then Shadow Broker resources could probably leave a flash-clone or something behind... but a shit-can is a vulnerable vessel no matter the plan. I'm not sure how she could escape, but that's half the magic I suppose.

Shepard and Garrus back together... and Cerberus trying to get in on the fun. Well, that could get messy. I cant wait to see how you manage that in what ever direction you are taking us.

Rawk on and be awesome!
Pietersielie chapter 9 . 11/19/2016
Thanks for a great story! Quite entertaining chapter, looking forward to see what comes next!
orion0905 chapter 9 . 11/19/2016
Yay no more dancing, also tone for some shadow broker stuff.
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