You copied this. I know, since I read the real one before, which had about 28 chapters in it.

Well written, aa much of a tabor the topic is. Shows how Stan sees blood as thick as bricks.

I would like to add Dippers call

You should add how the call with dipper went, and how that creep josh got his butt kicked! Love the story. Good job.

I find this bittersweet. Though more sweet because Stan was able to save Mabel, and they had a bonding moment at the end. That creep Josh should burn in Hell.

Poor Mabel :( Thank God Stan came to her rescue.
Note to predators: Mess with Mabel and you'll get your ass kicked by Grunkle Stan.

IM CRYING THANKS ALOT

I love how protective Stan is.. In the show he was always protective of the twins even if he said otherwise.

*cries hysterically*

very well done

This is going to sound horrible, but I can see this happening in canon. I think about these types of situations a lot actually... You wrote this wonderfully! Stan's relationship with Mabel is beautiful and you portrayed it perfectly. Poor sweet Mabel. Like others have said, you should continue this! You can have Mabel telling others and her recovery. Protective Dipper! And Wendy! And Ford as well! Soos would also try his best to do whatever he can to make her feel better. All in all, great story!

Wait till Gideon finds out then josh is gonna be in for some real pain!

Go Stan! That was awesome! It just served Josh right, thinking he could attack Mabel without getting hurt by her family.

I'm sorry, but hurting a pre-teen girl (or boy for that matter) sexually is just plain wrong. Sad to say, there are people like Josh out there. But at least Mabel wasn't hurt that way, but it really left her in a state. I would love to see a follow-up where Mabel and Stan tell Dipper, Soos and/or Wendy what happened and they can help Mabel deal with what happened to her.

Sweet, adorable Mabel unfortunately found with some people (like Josh) one can be just too damn trusting.

Seriously though, I would really love a follow-up.

This was awesome and amazingly done. This is certainly something I could see happen. Are you going to continue this? I think this would be great if it is a chaptered story. But a oneshort is good too.

Again nicely done. The emotion and reality and chances of this really happening are amazing and I loved how you made Stan and Mabel act so in character was awesome.

I hope Mabel learn self defense and Dipper too.

I'm glad Stan beat that piece of shit before he take Mabel innocence.