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Love how this story is going so far. Congrats on your writing; you’ve kept them both in character. Hope you starting updating again (no pressure). I’m curious why he using power of Genesis over Exodus.

Woah! What a cliff-hanger! Oh man, this is so interesting, I wonder what you have in mind.

Firstly, I would just love to say what a marvel this fic is, from the way you incorporated Shakespeare into the story and how you perfectly portrayed the characters of Yoshino and Aika (also a million points since you decided to make Aika as one of the MC of this story, since I she is such a unique and complex female character that I rarely find in anime anymore, if ever) From the pacing of the plot to how you bend the realities of the canon to suit your story without making it AU, I applaud your mastery. My only complaint is that the story would have been so much better if there was a continuation since Aika-centred fics are a rare gem to begin with, my only wish is that for you to at least give us an ending to this already perfect setting just so that this reader may be given the peace of mind to find out this stories' ending (a suggestion, not a request).

Awesome fic, this fandom needs more fics like this one. I really like how spot on their personalities were. Can't wait to figure out why Yoshino is using the Tree of Genesis power instead of Exodus. Hope you update soon.

I hope it is not oneshot!

This is amazing, Aika was completey IC. And I don't know why it took me so long to find this. Please continue this. Please.

Interesting so far. I wonder where you will take this. Thanks for sharing.

I'm so happy that someone is writing for this fandom. I'm so happy that it seems to be a Yoshino-centric story. I'm so happy that the person writing this fic is my favourite Man writer.

*wink*

Hane no Zaia, you wonderful person, this is already really interesting, and I cannot wait for more. I love Yoshino and I feel you got his characterisation spot on perf.

You going off anime or manga canon?

Wow that cliffhanger :D
Pls continue the storry

*Stare* Continue this. This has some promise. And the fandom needs more fics anyways.

I love this! Please please please continue this.