The reason for Rias and Raynare being impossible to happen as a pairing is a simple word called lifespan.

I read all 25 volumes of dxd they don’t fall in love like Humans do they have different morals and ethics, and social norms.

Humans are conservative the lowest life form, and Devils never breed them with them because their society is centered in being more powerful meaning having stronger offspring than the other clans.

Please continue. I'd love to see where Chisato and Naruto's relationship will go

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this idea sound interesting.

Can you please continue this story? It's pretty good and I'd love to read Naruto and Chisato continuing what they were doing in the kitchen next chapter.

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I was thrown by the length of this chapter. I can understand the need to make a chapter as long as possible since lot readers live under the idea that longer is show better, but 23k is a kind of cumbersome as it takes multiple sittings at a time to read it all. It would make for an easier time to be able to read shorter chapters of around 5k that can be read in a single session instead of having to constantly reload the page and try to find where I left off on.
I like the fact that Naruto at least partially practices Kendo. Knowing that he actually practices in swordplay will make things less jarring should he later take up a holy/demonic sword.
The lunch scene with Murayama, Katase, Kiryū, and the Perverted Trio seems largely unneeded. I know the general rule is ‘show, don’t tell’, but really the only things of importance that was brought up in the entire scene was that Issei had already had his encounter with Raynare and that it hadn’t gone as it had in canon.
I really like the fact that you brought Jiraiya along for the ride in this story. It introduces an unusual dynamic that is largely unseen in DxD stories; Naruto having an instructor/mentor that can properly cater to his growth in the shinobi arts instead of having him either stumble into using a new chakra technique or having him miraculously discover how to use an aspect of chakra that he previously knew next to nothing about.
Still on Jiraiya, it was a nice touch having him discover the supernatural world and integrating into it. It makes sense that a spymaster would discover a hidden supernatural world beneath the suffer world. Him becoming chummy with Azazel is another nice touch seeing as them having similar personalities would obviously lead to them being on good terms.
Introducing character from other series into the story as members of a mercenary group ran by Jiraiya is an interesting concept, though I do wonder if they were introduced just for the sake of introducing them or if they’ll actually be able to play more than minor parts in the story. Surely there would be a point of contention between Rias and Naruto if Naruto continued to run missions for Grigori. Especially since Rias now has a true reason to hate Grigori being that they ruined 8 months of planning and ‘stole’ a Longinus from under her nose.
I can respect that you more or less discarded Issei from the story without killing him off or some other contrived bullshit to make him less important. I’m slightly giddy knowing that the Boosted Gear is out there, but not knowing who has it beyond it currently being in Grigori’s hands. Whoever it goes to be it ally or villain it should be an interesting turn from the norm.
It was brilliant to have Akeno call Rias on her shit and gives a new light to the dynamic of their relationship. It’s a shame that it ultimately proved useless since Naruto recanted on his decision to not join Rias’ peerage not even a day later.
Over all I wish there had been more of a discussion between Rias and Naruto, wherein Naruto actually struggles between joining Rias’ peerage or not, especially considering that throughout the capture it was stated multiple times either through both the narration and character dialogue that Naruto’s sole focus was getting home.
The reason that Naruto and Jiraiya can’t go home seems confusing at best. Saying that they’re worlds are converges just give me the impression that their two universes are on the verge of colliding like in the Marvel Incursion Event. While the prospect of that seems, interesting I don’t think that was what you were trying to imply.
It was a decent read. There’s a lot of unneeded fat that could be cut away from, a lot of dialogue comes off as robotic/alien, and grammar and sentence structure errors becomes increasingly jarring and apparent as the chapter goes on. Overall, I say that it needs some elbow grease and running it through Grammarly and/or Hemmingway would help a lot, but this story is not something that I regret reading.

This story caught my interest. Don't let it die. It hold much promise. Keep moving it forward.

I vote for Naruto's mass harem (Total: 20); Rias, Raynare, Afleia, Akeno, Kuroka, Rosseweisse, Moka (Inner only), Xenovia, Saeko, Kuroko Smith, Rachnera (Naruto's Arachnera familiar), Leone, Akame, Ravel, Seekvaira, Kalawarner, Isabella, Yubelluna, Yasaka and Tiamat (Blue Chaos Karma Dragon has same personality and appearance of Esdeath).

This is great I really enjoyed Hail's focus and thought that this one had a lot of potential I recall that someone else took up the challenge but considering it haven't been updated in so long I am happy that you are giving it a try. The changes so far are definitely really interesting and I can't wait to see where it will go.

when will u update this fic? it's cool

The one thing I always remember about the other story was that Issei got his gear removed and nothing was done about it, My question is, is that going to happen again or will the Fallen keep the Booster Gear?

Awesome Fic Continue Please
Please Naruto x Kalawarner x Raynare x Rias x Kuroka x Yasaka x Gabriel I Really Really Love This Couples :)

try having one story that is actually worth reading before shitting on everyone else