Alright, answer me honestly here: Did you take inspiration from my story or did you just steal the idea from me?

Not only is the fucking name of the story, letter by letter, exactly the same as my own, but the general concept of the story is the same as well. Second son, Stark family and Nightmares. Even the age difference between the character and Robb is the fucking same.

What the hell?

I suggest you take a few lessons on English. Your dialogue needs to be in quotation marks. You also need to work on your punctuation.

For example, you've written:
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He walked over and pulled a chair next to her bed. He smiled with joy. He's more Stark then Tully isn't he.

Yes, we should name him Brandon after your brother. She then heard the babe whine like he didn't like the name.

I'm afraid he doesn't like Brandon my love.

About Hoster then after my father? Another whine came only he cried louder. She kept rolling off names Torrhen, Rickard, Domeric, Arthur, William, Jorah, Kermit, Kyle. With every name the babe would cry like he was picking his own name.
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It SHOULD be:
He walked over and pulled a chair next to her bed. He smiled with joy. "He's more Stark then Tully, isn't he?"

"Yes, we should name him Brandon after your brother." She then heard the babe whine like he didn't like the name.

"I'm afraid he doesn't like Brandon my love."

"How about Hoster then, after my father?" Another whine came only he cried louder. She kept rolling off names Torrhen, Rickard, Domeric, Arthur, William, Jorah, Kermit, Kyle. With every name the babe would cry like he was picking his own name.
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Without quotation marks, your readers can't tell where the characters are speaking. Without punctuation, the story is borderline unreadable. Fix these two things and you'll have a much better piece of fanfiction to your name.

..You need to learn how to dictate the style of writing you are using from the story to tell when a person is speaking.. It's quite annoying to have to read it like this.

please put some quotes for damn sake

The concept of a second son closer in age to Robb has been done multiple times, some good, some bad, I hope this turns out better than most I've read. So far it's an enjoyable read, just remember to add quotation marks when a character speaks because without it makes reading a bit difficult. Keep up

You forgot to add Quotation marks when Catelyn speaks.

Nice intro..you should put "" when a character is speaking though so we can know. Besides that I liked it, maybe longer chapters. Keep it up.

Peace Bro.