I know it's been a while but your story is awesome and I would to love to read how it ends.

I cried A LOT with Ollie and Soeedu scene

Wow! A tough one! Poor Speedy, I so love her, she must feel so sad and alone...
please continue to writte this.

Yes! I love this (not the hurting baby Sara part, but the story is very interesting. Please, write more Ollie and Speedy moments, I love their relationship

hola I do love Ollie and Speede brother and sister moment! I hope for more!

Did he kill Sara and now is he killing Laurel. What is wrong with him. Good chapter.

I like it! Awesome start :)

I loved it! I like how this is written (primera persona it's called in spanish, i don'T know the word in english) But it's like Thea is thinking... and talking... congatlations, i want to read more!