snickers... dick trying to be a good brother roll to his younger brothers but hes thinking like like jason on the inside... else were john and superman just told bats what the kidos did in his gotham ahahaha XD ...

omgs i love it jaybird and dicky all cuddles hehe! so cute and funny too! hey Jay it was scarecrow... go get'em! lol XD

aawwwww jaybird XD

I really like your characterization of Jason.

I'm brain dead right now, sorry. Just know that this was a lovely chapter, and that those last two lines were the best! It's so true and everybody knows it.

Really loving your story so far. I think you do a great job depicting each character. All of their POV' seem to be on point and very well thought out. You can tell how much attention you put into your writing, and I appreciate all your hard work. Please update soon, I am looking forward to your next installment.

Cool seeing an update, I enjoyed the setting up you did in this chapter and can't wait to see what becomes of it. Good luck with life and see ya next time!

You've grown as an author! And this is a great story

Very firm rule, that Bruce broke constantly. Lmao. That was fantastic. I'd love to see more of Jason and Dick. Maybe where they get ambushed and have to rely on each other to get out alive.

Raaaaaaaaawwwwrrrr loved ot wo bry much even if it was unexpected
Mainly bc I can totes relate to Jason... Dick is soooo cute:)

This is a great start! Keep up the good job!

That author's note! Every time I have to double check and figure out that it isn't part of the actual story. :) Anyway, about a continuation, whether I asked or not I don't remember and this is going in a good direction. Don't know what direction that is, but it's a good one. Also, probably whatever ship/s you decide to throw in here or not, will fly. I really like all of this chapter, but especially the part where Jason is speculating how Dick got the scar on his ribs. Partly because you seem to capture how Dick fights so on point, partly because (and this is probably just me) when you said knife or sword, my first thought was honestly Slade. One little writing thing: May is used for permission, while might is used for possibility. I know there is a mix up of those at least once, don't remember if there are more. It's not a big deal, most people probably wouldn't notice it right or wrong.

This was cute you should add a chapter if duckie had a nightmare that night

Aw, this is so adorable! I really love that Dick has to go see his brother's to feel secure. .

-KW13

*happiness*