This is an interesting story and I am glad that I have found it and That it has been updates recently only increases the pleasure of reading it.

I do have two small suggestions though:
When you are indicating who's point of view (pov) the story is being told from, maybe it would be less confusing (it's a bit of a harsh transition for the first few words) to not just say 'Jane's or "lizzy" or who ever else. Maybe underline it and change it to Jane's POV: or something similar. Something clear and distinguished from the rest of the text and a header of sorts as well.
In the same mean, when reading the sisters letter maybe instead of "(kitty/mary)" you could take it out of italics (which is a good way of distin6between the letter and the reader) and in normal font write that the handwriting had changed to kitty/mary's.

Otherwise really good story, it's not too long and drawn out neither is it lacking in details. The story is interesting and the characters (with the welcomed exception of jane's newfound strength) are in line with what one expects.

Bravo!

I'm so glad you've updated this fic. Mr Harrington seems like the perfect man for Jane and I want to watch their relationship grow. Lizzy and Darcy must come to terms soon, too. The Bingleys have a lot to answer for, and their weakness and bad manners will ultimately cause their distress.
Thank you so much. I hope the one good thing that comes from our Covid-19 house arrest is that your muse visits you and you have the time to write.

Re: Chapter 17:
Wonderful set down by Jane! Lack of courage is a strong insult that Bingley deserves. I hope he told Darcy, so they can both be impressed. Maybe it will cause him to mend his ways and control his sisters, even if it is too late for him with Jane.

I have just re-read your delightful story. I hope your muse is cooperating and we will see another instalment soon. Keep safe and healthy during this awful corona crisis.
Jen

What a joy seeing this new chapter. Thank you for the work you share with us and I am truly enjoying your work.

I’m so glad you’re back! I enjoy this story and can’t wait for the next chapter!

Loved reading about this version of Jane! Thank you for writing! Look forward to more! :)

That was a nice letter from Papa. It was much appreciated. And it must have been difficult for him to write. Apologies and all.

Oooh! I gather that Bingley now knows that he missed the boat with Jane. Too bad for him!

I have enjoyed these new chapters very much and I can’t wait for more!

This is a great chapter after the distress of meeting Bingley! It feels good to see Mr. Bennett after all this time decide to admit his failure as a father and commit to change. Lets hope it is real!
Thank you for sharing your talent.
Christinebj

So only his favourite, Elizabeth is deserving of an apology.

Wonderful!

That was an interesting chapter for sure! Mr Bennet who actually apologise, that’s new! Can’t wait to see where you take this story

The letter was lovely.

Wow this is a great story I am enjoying your characters very much. Thanks for sharing your twist and stay safe.