lol crackling yes raven smirking at her boyfriend beastboy i am a witch and i put a love spell on you where you will love me and only me

I like that the way this went down. Her vulnerability was the catalyst to bring out his true feeling fir her.

I don't know why, but if I'm being totally honest I thought this story was going to be about someone getting stuck and needing help in the bathroom with no toilet paper. Oops

There are so many possibilities that could be exploited with this story and is that you have already demonstrated with the fics written after this story that you really are a great writer.

I need answers, I really need answers ... And it's just the first chapter! I'm really intrigued.

Although apparently many give the victory to Raven ... I give it to Garfield, not only for being my favorite character, but also because it shows that Raven is going to restrain instead I feel that Garfield even though it is about Raven is going to fight to the death.

Awww I hope she heals :( Reading this story was like getting hit by a tsunami of feels. I love the fact that Raven's hair was longer also!

-Marshtompz

When I saw the description say one-sided, I was worried you meant Beast Boy developing feelings for Raven and Rven outright rejected them. Glad I was wrong.

Sometimes it just takes a little thing to change your perspective on someone, and that change is all it takes to start re-evaluating your feeling for that person.

I enjoyed reading this. It was a nice little story of Beast Boy searching his feelings and maybe finding something he didn't know was there.

It was a little sad that he thought so little of himself when he was thinking of who Raven would go to talk about personal issues.

Beautiful. This is absolutely beautiful. The writing, the characters, the details, it all held my attention from beginning to end. I actually read your story twice. I think I found it on Ao3 first, then found it be chance here. If I knew of the other shows and games that you wrote for, I would've read more of your stuff, that's how hooked your writing has me. Thank you for writing this story

You can't just leave it there! It was a great start. Love to see how it blooms between them, if it does.

awesome! please update soon

I love it, please do keep writing I have to have some good quality bbrae in my life ! X