What the fuck is this half-retarded dragonborn doing? Someone invaded her friend's home, and she fights them for a bit and then just welcomes them?

1) You can't seem to use commas - red flag 1.

2) Emo dragonborn already - red flag 2.

More of this story please!

Loved this chapter!

Well i must say i dont think if elsif and thorin will kill each other or have crazy nasty sex
I think hearing this story will make elsif bond with thorin over their losses and pain or at least understand each other
But when will they begin their romance

I hope she accepts her werewolf, werewolfs are the best

Omg lol! Gandalf scolding them and Bilbo mentioning how awkward this "pull business" is were both great moments! Especially Bilbo, because he'd totally think that. Hobbits are proper, prim individuals with no interest in being seen to contemplate such matters. Though I do believe they're actually secret gossips lol.
And Thorin and Elisif... Bilbo's right: if they don't calm down, they're going to kill each other lol.
Great story and thanks for the update! The only suggestion I might make is to watch your tenses, otherwise, great job!
And I'm glad you updated, and totally understand the not updating every week; I just published my first fanfic, and the update schedule is much more onerous to stick to then I had believed. So take your time. I'll be waiting patiently for the next update.
Best wishes ~

I'm so glad you finally updated! It's such an amazing story, please update soon!

nerfing the dragonborn

i like this all but one thing that she was married

Please come back! I love love love LOTR/Skyrim crossovers and there are very few that are done well. This is one of them. Cannot wait to see how Thorin (the most stubborn dwarf EVER) attempts to navigate the pull. I'm sure he'll conceal it from her for as long as is possible, probably try to be a bit of a dick but fail utterly, and end completely under her , thanks for the story and best wishes

My god is this well written, I’m glad you’re back and that this is receiving attention again please continue and please keep up the good work. Though one thing seems to stick in my mind, if Thorin can beat her no matter the circumstance, how can she have beaten so many dragons...

I liked it a lot. They started talking and even fighting together quite skillfully I might add. And now Elsif knows Thorin is a king.
Those assassins made me worried. Good the company got rid of them.
Until next time!
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Wow, that was deadly intense and fascinating. It is always amazing to see two such skilled warriors. I loved it. I think Elsif needs to talk to someone about her issues. It will do her a power of good.
Until next time!
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A highly entertaining chapter, ha ha. Those two are so intent on getting on their nerves. I can't wait for her sparring with Dwalin.
Until next time!
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