Reviews for Complicated |
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luv2write12234 chapter 8 . 10/11/2012 poor hermione |
luv2write12234 chapter 2 . 10/11/2012 lol love notes? chessy... i love it! |
xX hArMoNy chapter 6 . 8/22/2005 this is a really good story, i love it, only thing is to me it drags on a bit and i skip a lot of paragraphs... cyaz da~chosen_random_one |
nottinghill chapter 12 . 2/2/2004 Okay. I have mixed feelings about this story. The writing is brilliant; i've only seen one grammatical mistake when you put 'quif's' instead of 'quiffs'. However- and really, no offense- Hermione and Ron really shouldn't be together. They are fully meant not to be. And Hermione was just too eager to go off and snog draco with very little hesitation. There was nothing that happened to make them change their opinions of each other. I'm sorry if I sound really really mean. Well done, you're a good writer. |
fredmeister77 chapter 10 . 6/9/2003 MAN! this is a scary story! its too perfect. everyone is happy voldemorts dead sirius is cleared everyones in love. i personnally dont like this story...but i suppose its ok... no offense... im also thinking about writing one like this but without the whole draco thing...and less perfect... i prefer sirius you know...like a guy on the run but hes really nice. |
Nataku-kun chapter 12 . 3/2/2003 YAY! good fic |
gwen25 chapter 5 . 2/5/2003 i think this was a great chapater and it is a good fan fic so far. send me all the new |
Protagonist Hiro chapter 3 . 1/28/2003 Noooooo! Mr. W CAN'T lose his job! Mr. W rocks. ALL the W's rock. We love the W's. Say it ain't so, Tracy_Lou, SAY IT AIN'T SO! Ahem. Yes. Well. Much awaiting chapter 4. Splendid job so far, Ron/Mione freak that I am *gives Malfoy the Evil Eye, even though she feels for him in secret*. Continue! Rave on, Paige |
Protagonist Hiro chapter 2 . 1/28/2003 Oh, my poor misunderstood Ronnikins...how utterly stupid you are... YEAH, MALFOY, YOU BETTER "OH SHIT!" Heh. Onto chapter 3. |
Protagonist Hiro chapter 1 . 1/28/2003 Woooooo! R/H smooch, sweet. Poor Hermione...and exactly what is our good little friend Draco going to do about his sudden epithamy? Oh, the drama! Oh, the humanity! On to chapter two! |