Reviews for Feet First, Don't Fall |
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![]() ![]() ![]() She always "shit shit shit" Not clary's thing |
![]() ![]() ![]() Another satisfying Clace treat. Thank you. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Have you ever considered putting in an epilogue? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Really addicting to read and I have to say it made me much more emotional then I was expecting. Fantastic job. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Another fantastic story! I swear over the past week I’ve read most of your MI stories. The only thing I would like to suggest is maybe put somewhere in the first chapter that there are drug references made throughout. Only reason I’m suggesting it is I know there are some out there who are triggered by such things. Anyway, phenomenal story. Your grasp of Clary and Jace is probably my favorite. Britt |
![]() ![]() Thank you for writing this. IT was written so well and I cried so much towards the end |
![]() ![]() ![]() damn i was not expecting izzy’s death. i loved reading about the whole group growing up, doing better for themselves. i was happily reading through 28 chapters. i’m upset that it stopped just there with jace pouring his heart out. update soon! you’re an incredible writer. i have been loving reading through all your fics! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved this story even though it really did have heartbreaking moments made me cry a few times while reading really didn't see that coming while reading, but to me that is what makes it so great cause you put moments in your stories that you really don't see coming. I really liked the relationship with all the characters especially some moment between Alec and Clary I thought they were so sweet. Was also glad that Jace did go after her in the end thought they were both going to remain really stubborn on that lol. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Reading this story again...you're that good! |
![]() ![]() I’m going to kill you. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That 30th paragraph... |
![]() ![]() ![]() NOOOOOOO fantastic plot twist |
![]() ![]() ![]() I don't wanna leave spoilers in my review, so I'll just say I literally cried several times while reading this. If that isn't proof of what a fantastic fic this is I don't know what is. I love love loved how Jace and Clary weren't emotionless towards each other despite just being "friends with benefits". They still cuddled, kissed, touched, made breakfast together like a couple, etc. From the start, even when they were denying those bigger feelings, they were still there, and it showed. I couldn't get enough of that. I also love what finally brought them together. Even if broke my heart. Man those last few chapters were rough! Oh and I gotta say how they were all huge into partying was so fun to read. Like yes, you're young live it up! Great fic. One of my favs for sure :) |
![]() ![]() I have been sobbing through these last ten chapters. Anytime Izzy was mentioned I just started crying. Ugh, you are such a good writer but, seriously, give me a warning so I can buy a box of tissues. Anyways, I luv luv luv your work. Thx for sharing this with us #bigfanrighthere |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was an amazing story! One of my favorites! Going to miss it but you are such an incredible writer. Thank you for sharing your gift with us! |