This is really, truly beautiful. Leonard is the only one I've ever really shipped Sara with. And Captain Canary babies!

Loved it if u can plz make a sequel

I totally agree with what you said but the actor requested for him to die because he was offered a job in the show Prison Break. Just sp you know if you didn't know

I love it Was so adorable Sara And Leonard are so cute together

I have always been a fan of dc shows all along my favorite characters were Leonard and Sara. When the first few episodes aired I watched them with my dad. I told him those two people would be such a good couple. He said that would never happen. But when snart told Sara he had feelings I was so happy and then what do you know he died. I have cried when characters died but I balled when snart died. This is how the story should have gone.

OMG! I loved this! Usually I stick to Caitlin and Zoom/Jay but when I saw this I was all 'Oh, my gosh, I need to read this.' And I think this is how they shoulda made it in the real deal.

I love this Fan Fiction. You wrote this beautifully. I'm so sad that I just found it now. I wish the directors for CW had used this amazing idea.

OH MY GOSH. Tears are falling, my friend. BEAUTIFUL! BEAUTIFUL! BEAUTIFUL! BEAUTIFUL! BEAUTIFUL!

Oh, I love babies! Awesome twist with Leonard as Chronos.

Oh, so much better than what actually happened!

Helpful hint: watch your scene transitions. Some are happening so fast, it gets confusing.

MY GOODNESS! Thank god I discovered this fict, I am filled with tremendous joy after reading this two shot.

Despite the predictable plot (after reading a few parts I knew Sara's pregnant and Snart would still be alive as Chronos), I love love love it so much. I still enjoyed reading every sentences, I love what you did to the characters. This was also beautifully written.

Great job! xx

OMG. I LOVE THIS AND I LOVE YOU. This is perfection! I wish this had happened instead of them just killing Len off in 'Destiny'! Bless you for writing this!️

Ah, it got fixed, this morning chapter 2 was a copy of chapter 1.
I liked the mick/sara moments the best. I do like how he just put the ring on her finger and left.

What happened to mick and why he disappeared? And couldn't they tell that chronos was no longer mick because of the different height and build?

It is the story the writers should have wrote. I can not wait for the second part.

That is what I wished happened and hoping for a better happy ever after