Better than the original. fuck you Kishi, Sasuke makes more sense as a girl.

aw nice ending to this chapter. very sweet.

Kurama would have reopened his chakra points...

The parts with Naruto and Suki were good. Everything else was kinda meh. The council was very meh and I honestly don’t know why they existed as an antagonist. And most of the other character, other then Kakashi were kinda not all that well done.
Overall this is a good story but the focus could have been a bit tighter and the characterization could have been better handled for side characters.
Stuff to work on. So good job.

And in their next life, suki became sasuke. Naruto had to marry hinata and sasuke with sakura. Well fate is really fickle.

well done

Beautiful story

Honestly, while this is cute and funny the Kyuubi is a major let down for me in this fic. He has had his moments but his constant phrases of Demons do this, Demons do that, bla bla bla, really annoys me. Kurama is a mass of chakra, it doesn't have a gender and it doesn't have a sex drive. Most importantly, while it is sometimes called a demon it is not a demon. The fact it could only smell 2 male scents on her as well is stupid. Walking through public places and shops she is bound to end up smelling of other people for those with sensitive noses.

awwwww

good story nice chapters and you weren't all over the place

did you forget that kyuubis name is kurama

NOICE. TIGHT. COOLCOOLCOOLCOOLCOOL.

Great story, especially the first half.

Don't get me wrong, the second half was not bad...but the first half was better. It's only my opinion but whenever pregnancy and babies appear in a story, its quality drops.

Don't mind me, I'm just nitpicking. It was an amazing fic, a real jewel. Good Naruto/femSasuke stories are almost inexistent. Yours is even completed, which only makes it even better

10 out of 10

Feel like the characterization became a bit off as the story went on. This fic should have more reviews though.