Reviews for Wonderland 3: Pool of Tears
ImaginativeFury chapter 1 . 12/30/2017
Shitfic
Fanfictionfanatic2324 chapter 4 . 1/22/2017
Hmm, I'll note the over powered nature of Senator Kinsey comes from the fact as a joint American Canadian production the power of a United States Senator was confliated with that of a member of the party in control in a parliamentary system of government. Chancellor of the Exchequer he was not. en. wiki/Chancellor_of_the_Exchequer Otherwise I'll note when the characters themselves have suspension of disbelief it is hilarious. Also, Hammond would call the President to confirm what he was being told. I'm different of course in I don't see the Jedi as hero's but religous cultists who abuse government "authority" to kidnap children and interfere in governmental and political events better left to the professionals like Starfleet or an organized military and diplomatic corps like in any real life expedition.
goddragonking chapter 3 . 5/31/2016
great chapter , love the way this story is going, keep up the excellent work! Keep the good writing and hope for more update soon can't wait to read more:)
goddragonking chapter 2 . 5/20/2016
great chapter , love the way this story is going, keep up the excellent work! Keep the good writing and hope for more update soon can't wait to read more:)
EXC RID3R chapter 2 . 5/17/2016
An interesting start. Would be great to see how it goes