I must admit... That was a great chapter. :)

Great piece of Nani introspective on her fellow beloved crew mates and captain :)

Beautiful. I loved this One-shot. You write very well to the characters. I love these moments. Another thing I like about One Piece. Creating friendships with many people.

I have some ideas for some One-Shots. How some Marines have grown in those two years. For example, Coby (I was surprised and I liked his participation in that special before the film: Z). Or the thoughts of some Marines. Garp, after the war or when the Straw Hats return. Sengoku, after the arrest of Doflamingo (Remembering Rocinante)...

I like your One-shots.

This is good...

I just luv it ,,! ~_~

Wow, this oneshot was really really nice. Nami thinking back to earlier, how WRONG it is of luffy to be laying so still. Her thoughts about it were really nice, and her conversation with Shirahoshi was honestly so good and in character. How yes, they do have their individual dreams but they're also gonna be there with luffy every step of the way to achieve his. How her crewmates are annoying and stupid but she wouldn't have them any other way aah 33 it was really nice.

LUUUUFFFFYYYYYY NAAAAAMIIIIII
oh... i like them. Very.

Good work with Shirahoshi's dialogue, getting across curious but naïve. Her question about lying being bad sold it.
Also like what you did for her dream, for while the peace part was easy go guess, to be useful to Luffy is more subtle but given her talk with the Sea Kings very understandable

Like the work with Nami's development that her dream is also to have Luffy as the Pirate King. Also that you wrote a strong and well done friendship fic without any romance

Overall, thanks for the good story!

It's a good short.

i love those nakama feels fics
hope for more of ur work