Reviews for Xenopology
taking it easy chapter 1 . 9/1/2019
Steven has done the sleep psychic thing with Lars, so it's not just gems :D
FrostyChops chapter 8 . 4/3/2019
Yup, this was darn good! Always love these "little look into the character's lives" stories, they really help flesh them out in your head.
Good work! :D
avidreaded chapter 8 . 5/3/2017
What about Opal, Sardonix, Sugilite and Smokey Quartz?
Violet Rose of Darkness chapter 5 . 3/7/2017
I really like how you captured Lapis's chracter. Usually, people make it so that Lapis/Peridot is the saint and Connie gets jealous saying that Steven us "hers." I really hate when people do that and I'm glad that you gave both Peridot and Lpis flaws instead of making them perfect
PrairieDawn chapter 7 . 2/28/2017
Excuse to spit in a bottle...

I really like this. Nice opportunity to deal with an additional issue, all down to Future Vision. Oh, and I didn't mention this on the relevant chapters, but I usually hate present tense. It's often a sign that a writer either can't be bothered to use standard writing conventions or isn't comfortable writing in multiple tenses.

In your case, it feels like a deliberate stylistic choice. And it works.
PrairieDawn chapter 6 . 2/28/2017
This is soooo Connie. And I love that you've referenced her fear of public speaking again, after you made it a centerpiece before. It makes the group of stories feel more unified.
PrairieDawn chapter 5 . 2/28/2017
...Hey, I could lick that for you. Healing spit. No, really!

Sorry about the lack of constructive criticism. I know I love these, you know I love these, I feel like just being an a**hat for a while.
PrairieDawn chapter 1 . 2/28/2017
Now if he could just get control of them when he's awake...and figure out how to shut them off before he gets himself in real trouble.
jasongd chapter 8 . 1/22/2017
This is very very good story congratulation and I really liked Chapter 4: Lion
Savannah9137 chapter 8 . 11/10/2016
More please so we can read forever
E for Endurance chapter 8 . 9/4/2016
Amazing how you captured all of the characters and made the story feel organic. I love Connie, she is amazing! Please, do more.
CarnelianWing chapter 8 . 8/29/2016
This is a great final chapter. I am a little sad that the story's over now, but at least I can look forward to your other stories! Also, I KNEW it was going to be Alexandrite for the next chapter. I love how you showed Alexandrite's intense care and devotion for Steven and Connie (as a fusion of Garnet, Amethyst and Pearl). The thing I love the most though, is how the story ends with us knowing that Steven will wake up surrounded by his family (the Crystal Gems) and all the people he's befriended and helped (Connie, Peridot and Lapis). It reminds us of what a pure, loving child Steven is and gives us an image of the one big family he's created and how much they all care about and love him and each other. THIS is why I love your stories; you are just so talented at capturing the essence of a show and creating truly believable scenarios in their world. Fantastic job, I really enjoyed reading this story. I think my favourite chapters were Pearl's, Peridot's and Amethyst's.

On a side note, I was curious as to whether you would be interested in writing a story where you designed some fusions for the characters and wrote the first time they fused, how they felt, etc. I think you would be great at it but it's your choice and I'll be happy with whatever you decide to write next; I just thought I would offer the idea to you. Good luck with your future stories!
Animebinge chapter 4 . 8/28/2016
that ending line was hilarious.
Animelover314 chapter 8 . 8/28/2016
Man this was a good story, I love anything that has. Connie in it
Drunken Hamster chapter 8 . 8/27/2016
Awesome. Kinda down that this is it, but oh well. The only thing I could ask for is 'What was actually happening with Steven, and was it Alexandrite or all of the gems separated when he woke up?'

~Drunk
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