Thank you for writing

That right there was very impressive and I for one as impressed.

i really like the story. You did a great job on it

A fascinating set of stories. You have an extremely fertile imagination. Thoroughly enjoyable. Hopefully you might decide to give us the rest of those stories in the future.

A great little story, using what JKR couldn’t really get away with in the original series. Very imaginative.

If you can stop with the accent. it does not translate through the book. we know she has a french accent. Harry has a Englishman accent. But do you write that no. C'est vraiment gênant.

Great story!

Thanks for sharing :)

Well done.

In French, 'adieu' is the permanent goodbye; something you say to people you don't think you'll see again. The proper way to say goodbye to someone you will see again is 'au revoir,' 'au' meaning 'until' and 'revoir' 'to see again.' Just a pet peeve of mine

Great story

Amazing story, nice version

Dear author, I have one major request and one minor request for this fic that I would like to see. The major one is for, when Fleur is fully in control of her transformation, Harry to succeed in making her blush by whispering in her ear that if she is open to it he would like to try everything from cuddles to passionate embracing with her in her other form. The minor one is for Hermione to enter into a polyamorus relationship with Harry and Fleur.

Love it!

Just a suggestion, but I wouldn't be opposed to a sequel based on this version of the story as well XD the other arc is great, very well written. I'm just a sap for romance lol and I really liked how you progressed Harry and Hermione's relationship, I actually wasn't waiting for them to have sex, they have such a sweet relationship haha I know it's been awhile since you've touched this story, or even written a story period. Just. Ya know. I'd be up for reading a sequel lol