Moar ples~~

Do not push yourself. I'd rather have 3 chapters of Coeur's quality, then 15 chapters of low quality. Your fanfic will not run away, but retcons or simply dumb moments will ruin the readers enjoyment.

Yeah I still hate Cardin, he's a piece of shit who doesn't deserve any spotlight other than being the retarded stereotypical bully, and that's it. I do not want him to become friends with Jaune, the rest of his team seems okay though.

Why did Pyrrha save Jaune? Pyrrha never met Jaune and so Pyrrha would never save him. Pyrrha only saved Jaune because she wanted to be partners with Jaune because Jaune didn't know who Pyrrha was.

Eh, nobody cares

when will update be here?

good to see you update this

awesome

So Ozpin sent him back. Not just that, but he's done it before. Intriguing. Will the other instances come up by any chance? I'm also surprised Ruby didn't mention the fact that Blake is a Faunus, but then again realistically she might be trying to keep things on the DL to keep it from getting worst. Looking forward to the next update.

Looks like he'll be supporting everyone this time around. The only thing left would be his strength to return or his skills get better soon. Now it's time to find Blake. Pretty sure he'll get a memory or two when he meets Penny. Good to know you're still around. Until next time.

Well this was an interesting chapter to say the least

Just found this, and I've got to say that it's an interesting and fairly unique concept. Spelling and grammar could use some work, but that's true of any fanfic. Keep up the great work, and have a good one!

Really cool story. Can't wait for what comes next!

This pretty good and love this timeline. I hope see more Jaune getting stronger in this new timeline.

Really glad to see you're back! Now if only I could find the will to write again...

Sigh the sigh...

That aside, it seems Jaune's giving Ruby the words of wisdom - I would've liked it if Jaune said nope to Ruby's question, it sounds good in my head. It might just be mine, however.

So JNPR decides to help RWBY. I'm quite happy about that, and while I would say that I hope Jaune regains some memories, that would be impossible since he wasn't therethe first time.

A nice chapter to start back up your story from a long wait, and again, great to see you back!

I really enjoy reading this story very much keep it up.