There were repeats. And confusion.

Great story! For the endings, I really liked the "third sisters" one, with the "three falchions" one being a close second. Not such a huge fan of the misundersrandings, gratitude, or rival ones to be honest. I hope you decide to do something more with this story, because you developed Cina really well!

I love all this and want more ...

very good. a very believable personality for cina. goid job,

I like the hoshido reference.

While it isn't usually a thing to write multiple parallel stories, maybe you should in fact do as such.
A story revolving around little Lucina found in the future past as a event of two different time portals opening, Lucina questing for others and finding Robin yet again in the post Grima future and Lucina growing older with the royal family and finding Robin (a real odd situation with a lot of possible funny predicaments) and finally little Lucina appearing during their quest, maybein Chon'sin at the Mila tree when they arrive. The relationship between her and Robin as well as the other sheperds has a lot of potential for humor as well as very corny and sappy dialogue.
I really liked the one where she appeared in the ruins, the shock and possible argument or histeria would have been incredibly interesting to read.

So if you could, just continue writing these possibilities.
If Dane Namor could with "A Cruel Mother's Gift and other stories through time" I'm sure you could too

I love your continuity and well thought out plotline! Can't wait to keep reading

Really liked this plz update soon

oooo, another chapter!
Awesome, i like it. i definitely like how you've been, like, exploring her thoughts and feelings on this whole matter.
thank you for writing!
Also, you might not wanna swap around chapters, i can't review 'chapter four' 'cause i already did when it was, uh, this chapter.

Dude I just watched 5 Centimeters per Second and I was like "what even happened"

My. Goodness. This is just so good !

More4 of Three Falchions please! Misunderstandings too! And The Third Sister!

Nice. Very nice. Though the previous chapter was hell to read. Had no idea what was going on. But! Love the interaction between Robin and Lucina.

On another note, the beginning of the chapter can be read as the continuation of the end, mostly due to how vague everything is. That is, if you squint your eyes and tilt your head with the help of suspension of disbelief. Just sayin'.

Cause I really want more of the adorable Robin and Lucina interaction. Like, when she hits puberty... or God forbid, her periods.

"Robin? I've been feeling weird recently... and bleeding down there too-"

"Eek!"

"Wha-whats wrong? Am I sick?! Dying?!"

"No! Nothing like that! Absolutely nothing of the that sort. It's completely natural!"

"Then... why are you hiding behind that tree?"

"Hiding? Who's hiding? Not me. Anyway-" *throws book* "-read that book. It should explain everything."

"Robin? What's wrong?! Did I do something wrong?! I'm sorry!"

"Dear Naga... why me?"

You have really presented something fresh storywise.
I would recommend you start with the possible future scenario in which Lucina wakes up in the ruins and calls Robin her father. It is very interesting a possibility, and can be expanded upon greatly.
If you write this, be aware of something, most of the stories should not be one-shots. All of them deserve to be expanded upon, and you have a captivating writing style, in terms of explaining ones emotions. The interactions in chapter 4 were quite good too. I liked them a lot. Sure, you should improve on it, but what writer doesn't need to improve something they just took up?
Consider inserting a sort of light mood in this possible future, as well as joking tones. I'm aware that Lucina has a past that would need a lot of somber events to happen in it, but she is still a child. She'll eventually become at ease, with Robin at her side. A jealous Chrom would be funny too, as well as a fussy future Lucina!
I have hopes for you to make a good story, not for someone to adopt this, but for you to write it.
Many authors have since this year started to leave or forget about this site, and you've become a fresh wind in regards to this. I want to support your writing and I want you to continue and expand on this.
With regards, Greymane

oooo, more!
I liked it, it's a nice view into a small part of their lives, it's nice.
Thank you for writing