sarcastic review.

Wow, a Jien/Garrus Fic! How sad he must have been when she left for Andromeda...

FYI, FFN removed the Femshep Character tag, or at least changed it to J. Garson (As In, Jien Garson, the woman who created the andromeda initiative). Discovered this when seeing core-trilogy fics with 'J. Garson' listed instead of what had been Shepard (F).

Great story can’t wait to read the next chapters

Well shit either Jax is dead or this is a joke

intense.

Good job love your book

and so the plot thickens I thought you were going to do something like this

nice cant wait for the next one

Oh shit

All I can say so far is that from opening up the first chapter, I'm met with a wall of text. That is something that would discourage a lot of readers, and I think you should try and break it up in order to bring a but more appeal to newcomers. in all honesty, I wasn't going to read it until I read the reviews because of the wall of text, so I'm going to give it a shot.

Just a bit of editorial advice, author to author.

I really enjoyed reading this story, dont quit it!

Shepherd you probably made the worse mistake of your life

Wow, how does this story have so little love?

Awesome story!

Tbh, im kinda sad that you don't have more reviews and follows/ Favs. It's a great story. During the latest chapter I actually felt like I was on the battlefield, and thats hard to do for any author. Don't care if it takes you another month to release another chapter, ill just read it again. Don't stop just because your not getting reviews. I've seen people do that and it saddens me. Not to mention the Mass Effect FF is kinda dead :/.

Anyways, thanks for providing stuff to read!
~Venom

Don't know why people are getting so butt hurt over a spelling mistake. Think it's great so far, interesting, compelling, ect. Keep it up