This whole story was JUST THE MOST! It was a rollercoaster, and a fun one at that.

Its not at the level of It's not the Raptor DNA through pure chapter amount. Remember that the brain focuses on negatives not positives

Did I miss something with Gordon? What kind of space magic does he wield? I'm wracking my brain with possible reasons why he can do that stuff and I'm drawing a blank. And I like to think I'm usually pretty good at inferencing upcoming events in fanfics! For me, Gordon is the true puzzle of this fanfic. By the way this is really good!

Bit confused about Dr Freeman. Dr Wu just admitted in front of him that the Indominus had human DNA. Surely he would have reacted to that?

God, this is such a good story but it's so awkward to read it with Gordon Freeman as one of the main characters. Don't know how to feel.

Wait, Gordon Freeman? Not John Freeman? This would be a perfect opportunity for some Fullife Consequences.

I would have named her thorn

At first, I entertained the idea that Owen Grady was a wereraptor and attracted me to venture with this story. I even accepted the fact that there were original characters, since they were necessary for the story. But it frustrated me when they gradually began to move the real characters, and capture all the reflectors, as did Dr. Freeman, and characters like Dr. Wu and Owen were demoted to one side.

There was a moment in history, which displeased me a lot, it was that it no longer resembled Jurassic World, but seemed to focus more on the psychics.

But what made me furious was the unnecessary suffering of the animals. In my opinion the deaths of Capax or Dracul did not have to happen, they did not even have to fight to start. Or the death of the raptors. But by then it was very close to the end, and I decided to finish reading it, even if it was to close it and not have any doubts.

This story is so incredible. :D I swear I didn't think the ending would be like this.

I forgot last chapter, but I will describe the whole artificial insemination thing with one word: Rape.

REWRITE THIS STORY, WITHOUT THE PSYCHIC BULLSHIT. There is no other word for it. You don't even need to do all of it, just up to when Freeman reveals his powers. Instead, there are no powers. Jesus christ, only a few other stories that i have read have done something so garishly off course from the original premise.

Fuuuuuuuuuuuuccckkkkkk!

Dracul, once again, proves to be a discount Sobek. I LOVE Sobek. Bah!

Damnit reicarnation! I retake what i said last chapter.

You DO get bonus points! That actually redeems the fic; the most op character of all is taken DOWN. I take back my rewrite suggestion, everything wrong started with him, and now its GONE. Yay!

I feel at his point half of it is pulling stuff out of your ass.

Jesus, at this point, you've pulled a "It's Not the Raptor DNA" on me; I only read because of the Spino, I. Rex, and T. Rex and the dino villains. AND you have officially ripped off Sobek. Seriously, the only human character at this point I like is King.

Though, you will get points if Freeman dies for real.