So I reread this for the 3rd time over many days, and simply must admit it was just as good the 3rd time around. Your writing is superb and your story telling is on point.

Love how you managed to keep the characters true and as I’m rewatching this anime, I totally forgot how much I love this pairing. Love how repressed you made them & how hilarious parts of this fic were. The stone crashing through the window and Hieis ‘compliment’ actually made me lol. And Kurama with his too real commentary was amazing. I could literally picture his facial expressions as I read this. Anyways, good job and thanks for all you have done for this fandom. Honestly, I feel you write the most realistic Hiei/Botan on this site. I just gobble it up and hope you keep on writing.

PLEASE DON'T ABANDON THIS STORY! Don't get me wrong, I love the Botan x Hiei pairing, but this alt story is nothing short of captivating and absolutely wonderful. The characterization of each individual was spot on making this story even more interesting. Again, please don't abandon the story!

Love this

I think I do not know what else to write to praise your fics, is that they are so ... incredible, this particular caught me from the first moment, you really have a touch!

to tell you everything I am amazed, I have never read a story as well as yours, the course of events and the interaction between the characters, frankly it's beautiful, you took me to another world, a world full of suspense and love and humor too, in parentheses the story of the umbrella, I laughed a lot, so seeing Hiei do the Romeo under the window of Botan it killed me, I hope you continue to write stories about this couple in the same way, thank you for this wonderful fanfiction.

This was utterly, and wonderfully and beautifully written. From the slow, increased lust, the way he slowly toils and discovers his feelings, how she does it all for him and puts herself out there... To the silly misunderstandings of what an umbrella is, the serious and well written fight and the chilling beauty of the ice village.
It took me two days to fully read, and I'm so in love with your writing. I love the way you describe feeling, the way you portray the simplest motions and the scenery around them as they occur. I look forward to reading more of your stories.
Hiei and Botan are so beautifully written here together, and even the other characters though not 'centered' upon are amazingly done.
Thank you. Truly. This made my last two days bearable through it all.

Good job for writing this amazing story! This is My all time favorite hiei botan story

I have been binging this for the past couple days. I noticed the short time frame you managed to pump out such a lengthy fic, very impressive and well written! I am re-watching the show as it hits its 25th anniversary this year and forgot how much I liked Botan and Hiei. You have done an excellent job maintaining each characters personalities and interactions to the point I could see this easily happening in the show. Absolutely one of the best written and most entertaining fics I have ever read pertaining to this fandom. As I'm approaching the end, I'm a little sad the journey is ending as it really has been intricate, yet easy to follow and extremely well done. I loved your arcs and development! Great work and I totally cracked up after reading George played Barry White for Koenma. Absolutely hilarious!

I realize this is an old story, and I already reviewed your other most current one. But I have to stop for the night, it's 1 am and I have work tomorrow, but I had to let you know how much joy this story is bringing me. I physically cannot breath with these two. I'm dying with the sexual tension and oh ignorant Botan. It's killing me, i cannot wait to see what happenes and who makes the next move :)

I'll be back to this tomorrow .\\\\\\\\.;;;;;

Amazing ending! A blowjob for Hiei, I think, and sex after throwing Rinku from a massive tree lol. Botan has certainly changed in the last year. All for the better of course. It was hilarious that the demons in Mukuro's camp are horrified they have to deal with Botan whenever she shows and and they see her and Hiei about to screw.

I liked that Fubuki became the new spirit detective! I've always wanted to see more of her in the series and fanfiction. Kaisei went and goofed though, going down the route of potential Sensui madness. I'm sure Botan is right and nothing too serious is going on. Fubuki's immediate crush on Kurama was cute, and very much expected after she asked Botan if there were any cute boys on the team lol.

A job well done. I loved every bit of it.

They finally got to consummate the full act. Oral on Botan back in Kurama's apartment is one thing, but for both to finally get the full course after so long, was quite uhh...satisfying I did like that you had Botan in pain from her first time, which a lot of people seem to leave out of stories because it "triggers" them or some stupid nonsense, but she got over it after a few minutes and enjoyed herself many times, so that's all that matters.

Though...I don't know how Kuwabara is going to survive his encounter with Yukina. She sounded positively frightening and I'm sure she's going to break Kuwabara's hip tonight XD. Good thing she can heal him.

I feel like I know what Hiei is going through, being left alone with a child he has no idea how to manage. Very unconfortable.

It's the heartbreak hotel for Botan this chapter too. Everything she just went through and she wakes up to realize that Hie just up and left everyone behind, especially her.

Hiei does not have any luck with women does he. Be it his homeland or the women he encounters in life, so many of them are telling him the exact same thing over and over and making him feel like a fool and getting him annoyed.

I feel like Hiei was training with Master Splinter. That's kind of a cool thought though. Go ninja, go ninja go!

The three of them, sitting in a dark lonely prison, blaming each other for being stuck in the situation that they're in. That's amazing. XD

I mean...it's really Kurama and Botan's fault, and not Hiei's at all, but yes, Hiei shouldn't have repressed all his feelings and whatnot.

Kurama's been mostly forgiven, so that's good. Still don't like Koenma. There are valid points in his worries, but still...he's annoying.

Hearing Hiei finally admit that he loves Botan, coherently and knowing he's saying it, is fantastic. Simply splendid, especially after saying all that he did. Botan is right. Hiei has the higher capacity for love because it means so much more to him, but he rarely shows it.

I hate Koenma.