If that bully doesnt die horribly, im gonna kill someone.

oooo my god, I love this! please come back soon, i'll be waiting :)

great story. keep writing. update soon. I can't wait to read more! This is getting interesting.

I can't wait until Sans becomes Frisk's protector. Is this a SansxFrisk pairing by the way?

great story. keep writing. update soon. I can't wait to read more! This is getting interesting.

I need more of this story in my life. I think you are doing a fabulous job and I sincerely look forward to the coming chapters.

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Damn Frisk, you getting morbid, I love it! I love how different Sans is, like he actually feels bad about taking her soul. Part of me also feels like he was the most shocked when she said she thought he was funny more than her saying that he couldn't take her soul.

Omg is Sans about to enter the picture?

So is this an Underfell AU? I love it.

Amazing

Omg this us really good please update soon

At this rate, Frisk is probably going to look like a buttercup meadow soon... Very suspenseful chapter, and humorous as well. Which is not an easy thing to do, seeing as it's about repeatedly dying c;

This is really good and well-written! I can't wait to see what happens next!
Please update soon~

Please update soon

I'm going to be honest here - the odd, choppy summary is what has been keeping me from reading this story, time and time again. Then I clicked on it anyway, expecting dilettante, obtuse writing and walls of text, containing gruesome grammar - my flamethrower at the ready. But instead, I found this piece of art. This is absolutely wonderful so far, it's keeping me on my toes, lovely characterizations, intense, also right in the feels.

You might want to revise your summary, though, and make it sound more appealing, suspenseful, fluent. Just a suggestion c: