Reviews for The Seduced
callionope chapter 1 . 4/14/2019
Amazing plot! Amazing writing style! I love it!
Guest chapter 1 . 1/1/2019
This was awesome! So well done good job! I loved the slow build
QuirkCirc chapter 1 . 8/6/2018
God, I loved this so much. Awesome job! So hard finding good GaaHina while keeping the characters in character. Such is the trials of a crack shipper, I guess xD haha but I really loved how you explained Hinata’s past relationship with Naruto and Gaara’s infatuation with Hinata all these years. Like woah. Love me some character development. And gosh, I’m not a huge smut person but everything was just perfect. Especially Gaara, gosh that was funny with the whole “sit on my face thing” lol was not expecting that but gosh you made it sound perfectly natural for him and I loved how wrote Hinata. People just tend to write her as super innocent only to do a 360 and make her a hoe. But Job well done on balancing everything!
- Erik
Guest chapter 1 . 6/15/2017
Great story I loved reading it.
MlleShadow chapter 1 . 4/19/2017
Omg this was soooo good, one of the best GaaHina I've read! I had butterflies while reading this, I need a Gaara in my life haha Incredibly well done one-shot!
mariamae chapter 1 . 12/29/2016
Gaara is so cute I think he's not a virgin anymore because he is very good on what he did and he knows what to do. just sayin. but then this fic is wonderful,love the secret love of Gaara for Hinata.
Haruka2007 chapter 1 . 11/15/2016
Great one shot! What you wrote about wearing a condom at the end of the fic made me laugh out loud, but it's true!
Ini saya 69 chapter 1 . 10/28/2016
i think Gaara is virgin!
because i'm not find out the sentence like 'Gaara imagine her when he making love with other girl' there is just sentence that show me Gaara imagine Hinata when he 'play' alone and feel dirty aftar that, and i think that is really very badly cute! hahahahahaaaa
you'll not make part 2? okay, but i and many other reader must want you to make sequel . this fanfic is really nice, you know, it is hard to find nice GaaHina story, please for sequel .
thank you for choose Gaara and Hunata for this fanfic :) You should make many more XD hahahha i swear ;D
from Indonesian Hinata cent, thank you very much :*
midnight.candy chapter 1 . 8/12/2016
I loved this! Great story, great writing. Very hot!
NixEyes chapter 1 . 7/7/2016
awsome! even if is only an one shot , it was well written , i would love to see more stories of this pairing from you :)
Guest chapter 1 . 6/1/2016
Please continue to post fan fiction in English, you are an amazing writer.
Ringochan chapter 1 . 5/27/2016
I Really enjoyed it an i love your writting
Keep writting and you know... i love how these two get together (•w•)
So~Otsukaresama desu~v~
Socrates-Tier chapter 1 . 5/26/2016
I really enjoyed this
crystalblue19 chapter 1 . 5/26/2016
Haha, wow, that was amazing and so cute about how long Gaara had already liked her for~ The lemon was lovely and I thought he was a virgin at first but the the fact that Gaara knew where to make her touch herself to get her to climax before him tells me otherwise. xD

And ugh, please ignore that troll down below - this was a wonderfully entertaining story! x3
Ro chapter 1 . 5/25/2016
I loooooved it! It was amazing and so well done! Keep writing fics please!
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