| Reviews for Civil War as told by Luis |
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   PheonixQueen15 chapter 1 . 5/1/2019 This is...wow...uhh...I don’t know how to describe this. I do think that it’s awesome! |
| SapphiRubyCrys chapter 1 . 6/8/2018 Oh God this is Fantastic. I can clearly hear his voice in ky head while reading this like he is telling the readers the story with his own flare. Awesome |
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/2/2018 love the end |
| sudoku chapter 1 . 12/1/2016 This is super hilarious and you got the tone of Luis super correct. Instant favorite. Luis could describe other Marvel movies. I wonder how he would describe Doctor Strange. |
| darck ben chapter 1 . 9/12/2016 good story |
| browneyedgirl29 chapter 1 . 9/8/2016 This was bloody brilliant. I did not know I needed this in my life until now. Well done! |
| Myshi corp chapter 1 . 7/19/2016 I loved this story so much that I read it aloud to at least two of my friends. You captured Luis' voice and dialect perfectly, and the whole bit where he was talking about the airport battle like he was there was hilarious. I enjoyed the funny names for the Avengers (Bird Man, Cat Man, Scary Witch, Redhead!) and the ending. Wonderful job, and keep writing! Myshi Corp. |
| Batghost chapter 1 . 7/4/2016 Totally hilarious! |
| Denz-El chapter 1 . 6/4/2016 This is a crazy stupid fine fic ya got here! Y'know what I'm sayin'?! ;D |
| Armand chapter 1 . 5/26/2016 This was actually really good... I could hear Luis in my head as I read! Thanks! |
| Spidershadow5 chapter 1 . 5/28/2016 The only thing that could make this better is if the guy who played Luis would read it. |
| ladyfreque chapter 1 . 5/26/2016 I so love this! Thank you for writing it! You have the dialog down right. |
| shadowhuntingdauntlessdemigod chapter 1 . 5/26/2016 Absolutely hilarious! Great job! |
| Elessar's Daughter chapter 1 . 5/26/2016 That was hysterical! My favorite line was: "Cap went all like 'I'm 1000% sure. Dude's my first bro and I gotta follow The Bro Code. Never ever abandon a Bro in need.' It was so unlike anything Steve would say, but it basically summarizes his actions in Civil War. Great work! |
| Qweb chapter 1 . 5/26/2016 I knew by the description that this was going to be hysterical, and it was. I particularly liked the Super Secret Evil Octopus Organization and the scary but superfine Scarlet Witch. And the fake gasps of surprise. The only thing missing was how Luis saw the battle on the news when he was at a bar during intermission at the symphony where they had been playing Beethoven - super depressing and heavy like a bad meal - but it improved at the end when they played Handel, because the Baroque is the bomb, and the dude did fireworks music. Fireworks! There's a dude who knew how to party. Thanks for the fun story. |
