I know I'm late but this was great I actually enjoyed it.

Felicitaciones me gustaría mucho que la continuaras

Much like your other works, this story is adorable. Also like your other works, this is incredibly well written and quite creative. I have always found stories that include the Bruce's perspective of that night at the circus to be fascinating, but I think your interpretation has been the best I have seen thus far. Your stories are truly delightful, and I am eager to read more. Thank you~

I like this series of stories, but, just so you're aware, there haven't been any orphanages in America in many decades. Orphans are either put in foster homes, residential treatment facilities, group homes, or are adopted. Other than that, the stories are good.

What else do you want me to say. This is adorably killing me to the heart.

I love the fluff

Nice! Thank you!

Good stuff...except those exclamation marks! XD I liked the tone of this piece immensely, as well as the juxtaposition of imagery, the inadequacies of youth detention facilities and Bruce's sometimes painful efforts to communicate with a traumatised boy. Characterisation and actions given by the main players felt very organic and realistic in a way I seldom come across in this fandom. That being said...

Careful with adverb use and try not to state the obvious. Exclamatory statements such as the boy had disappeared! Are already implied in previous sentences. However, that is the only real sentence in this piece that irked me. The rest was good. Some sections needed tucking slightly, but nothing I was care comment at length about. Bruce's awkwardness was brilliantly conveyed through his actions and reactions to evolving events. I will be keen to see how this awkwardness ebbs away during later-set stories and narrative arcs.

It isn't a problem, but I felt that Dick in this story was more like a prop than a person. But that's only because the narrative was focused on Bruce's reactions to him rather than the other way around. For some reason, just thinking about the boy as some sort of prop Bruce carries around to elicit sympathy or hammer home the point he is human strikes me as amusing :) As if he might set Dick down in front of the media, gesture to him and say 'Look, I am a human being! I have a boy to prove it!'

Anyway, well done. Liked it immensely.

Really good work! Lol bruce, we all know you love holding Dick, who are you trying to fool? XD

I am just old softie, but I simply love this fluff :)

I love Bruce and Dick interactions! Your story was well written, and conveyed Bruce's awkwardness well. He's not used to being a father, but he settles into the role nicely and your portrayed this trait of his very well. Thank you for sharing. It was a super cute one-shot. :)

Although I read this before it still got to me I don' think I left a review you or not but all dick mini series is just amazing and original ,yeah, yeah ,yeah I know some my say in what!? and I would say: the presentation my dear . I've read all of the series and can't wait for the 12 part .
Great job Alexander keep up the good work

Last note (dick is so cute looking at there shoes )

That was soooooooooo sweeeeeeet! I can't get enough of daddy Bruce!

Ahhh my heart. Stop, your making me feel emotions.

So. Cute.
Loved it.
Omg could you do one where Dick is in his teen years and gets a bad fever or pneumonia or something just as sh*tty?
Your Bruce was very in character too, btw.