Reviews for Sapphires Meet Emeralds
Maur chapter 3 . 12/17/2019
This is different. Usually these duel time travel fics have the travelers at each other's throat. I hope this continues, but with a less choppy flow in the story telling.
InfinityMask chapter 3 . 12/16/2019
I’m happy this story finally got updated... I hope you would periodically update this one.
plums chapter 3 . 12/16/2019
I really really dislike how much of the chapter was spent on “the influx”.
forfanficsandorsocialmedia chapter 3 . 8/24/2019
This is weird I can’t understand it fully but it’s written well and is interesting
Sonia25 chapter 1 . 8/23/2019
13 horcrux is too much lol
IWantABetterWebsite chapter 3 . 5/20/2019
You've got a decent enough start so far. I hope to see more soon.
hesperus.stwarzs chapter 3 . 5/16/2019
yes please, try to right it again! :D
Hank1967 chapter 3 . 5/16/2019
I hope you will keep this up. It is a good fic and I like what you are doing with the characters.
The Impossible Muffin chapter 3 . 5/15/2019
We shall patiently wait.
Kagugu chapter 2 . 10/29/2018
thank you for your hard work
thunderofdeath97 chapter 3 . 9/17/2018
did you have to make harry look stupid compared to his sister? she seemedto lecture harry about loss, when it sounds like harry had it worse than she did
Truthandreality23 chapter 2 . 7/30/2018
Interesting story. However, there are quite a few grammatical and spelling errors errors. One of many examples: "What is that even supposed to mean?" Harry asked, placed a plate and knives infront of him..."placed" should be "placing," and "infront" should be "in front."

I suggest getting a beta who can help you polish up your story.
BrotherCaptainSheperd chapter 3 . 7/30/2018
WHEN WILL SAPPHIRE MEET EMERALD!
guardian of grayskull chapter 3 . 7/30/2018
Well, that's understandable, i will wait for the updates and take much time as you need, i do hope you get a laptop eventually.
Smutley Do-Wrong chapter 3 . 5/24/2018
Review note/reference, chap 3 is hiatus notice, so review is for c2, c1.

The main juggle mismatches here:
90 yr old Harry, 11 yr old Daphne.

Less mismatch than 16 yr old Violet, or arriving at 15 and wooing 10 yr old Neville(now ~ 11).

And then 90 yr old Harry 'gun shy' appeasing, of 16/11 year old Violet.

Lucky BWL Neville, TWO who lived time travel dimension hop helpers.

Big snags, bamf Voldy etc, needed in order to challenge the twin heros.
Tropes needed than usual ignore, of older time travelers actually repeating Hogwarts, year by year, & not bored to death.

You have parallel "adventures", for Violet & Harry. Is a threepeat with BWL Neville the best choice, than say, Harry & Violet arriving some years later in the timeline?
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