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I'm loving the potential for this! I can imagine that in the future Vegeta and Gohan are gonna clash about new Saiyan ideals and such. Hope you decide to continue this one someday. :)

I hope you continue soon

Gohan's "get closure" comment was the perfect drop-the-mike moment. I felt it. :)

I absolutely loved, loved, loved this chapter. The plot is great, and while reading I thought automatically that Vegeta would do something like this. The portrayal fits his character well, and the Gohan's depiction is just as intriguing. One can't help but think of this being a fool's errand on Vegeta's part, but then again this is the prince of all Saiyans. Great work.

Hey, you do what you want to do man. Have FUN with this. I myself won't lie, I REALLY like the idea of this fic and if I had super saiyan powers I would force you to make this as a slave . XD

Anyway. Im going to follow this story and you. Im a fanfiction writer and I do have the same struggles that you seem to be having from what you have written at the end of this chapter.

My advice, even if im a newbie. Do this for FUN! By doing that, you might just surprise yourself and create one of your best pieces of works yet!

So write what you want to write, when you want to write. (Or type XD).

Have fun man. Talk to you later. )

Okay. I dont know if you meant to. But the summary of this fic sounded just like Seth Rollins return promo. 'Rebuild, redesign, Reclaim.'

It feels like this is going to be a Shield story lol

Poor Bulma. I know Trunks is still young, but they both needed the things Vegeta could offer when he actually puts his mind to it. I pray they make some return trips here and there.

I'm a little curious how Planet Vegeta will be revived. Perhaps by finding more survivors like those from Heroes and Xenoverse, or just pure science? Either way, I am kind of hoping that Vegeta won't forget about Bulma and Trunks. I don't expect some bonding for the next ten chapters, but not indefinitely. Keep up the good work.

Great couple of chapters and start. I'm really looking forward to seeing how this will progress especially once the Saiyan race has been resurrected. I'm very interested in what the Saiyan social system will be like as you can't really judge a race by just it's warriors (even when dealing with a warrior race).

Also thank god Gohan's potential wont be wasted and he'll get to put his mind to good use in a government/political way as well perhaps he'll also become a General.

Until the next one.

Loved this chapter and I get what you mean as long as it good it doesn't matter about the word count or the length of the arcs or how frequent you upload. Hope you find your calling. bye

I find this story interisting. I would like to know what haporns next.

I have to say it's very well written so far. The plot is gripping and feels real due to great character delivery. Keep up the good work!

Is the summary a reference to WWE

Glad to see this story back on tracks, it has a lot of potential imo.