Reviews for Second Chances |
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AmatsuKitsune chapter 60 . 7/15 It's such a shame this fic hasn't been updated in ages, it's one of the few good Time Travel fics around, especially because it's Law being the protagonist instead of a Strawhat OTL Hopefully you'll feel like updating again someday (even if it's just a little summary of what you had planned to do with this before you stopped writing) |
Deaniel chapter 60 . 1/6 NeEd MoRe! |
Guest chapter 11 . 11/12/2019 YoU cAnT EsCaPe ThE MoNKeYs No MaTtEr hOw hArD yOu TrY |
Guest chapter 9 . 11/12/2019 I'm sitting here praying for ace sabo and luffy XD If not I'm a huge af ficking fan if Kid so I'm happy with my discovery of thos xD |
AceOfTriangles chapter 16 . 6/13/2019 penguin being an actual penguin is hilarious |
zeyreele chapter 16 . 1/14/2019 Definitely the most creative backstory for penguin lmao Maybe his mom or dad ate a one-time-only devil fruit and thats why he came out like that. Evolve-evolve fruit anyone? lmao |
haleighb15 chapter 38 . 11/4/2018 8 |
rf3 chapter 60 . 10/13/2018 new chapter soon? |
Guest chapter 52 . 8/25/2018 you should keep Law looking like a girl. |
Jengurl24 chapter 60 . 8/19/2018 This is a very interesting fic, I have to say, lol. The idea of a time travel fic has been done a few times but never have I come across one with Law as the main focus, so that immediately caught my attention and I was sucked in! And then things just got crazier and there were a couple points along the way where I found myself tilting my head going "Wha…? (o.O)" but it was all just so amusing and entertaining! I pretty much read all 60 chapters in one go and I'm actually a little bummed out I've caught up because now I have to WAIT. I just really, really want to see these guys grown up and how exactly they all set off for their own adventures in this awesome AU world you've created. I hope you come back from hiatus soon! I could easily read another 60 chapters of this fic! |
sarge1130 chapter 60 . 4/1/2018 The scene between Law and Kidd is so touching. The problem had been eliminated but the guilt is still there. Kidd is quite sensitive to Law's feelings. He recognizes Law's sacrifices for them when Tou-san was not around. Thanks for the update :). |
sarge1130 chapter 59 . 4/1/2018 So it was just a creepy pervert. Serves him right, he got what he deserved. |
sarge1130 chapter 58 . 4/1/2018 Oh Law, our poor baby :'(. This chapter is so sad. Law is trying to be strong but it's hard to give joy and love when you are also in pain. However, I wonder why Nami doesn't remember Law and so is Law on Nami. That was a sad solution Law had. Hope somebody knows what had happened. |
sarge1130 chapter 57 . 4/1/2018 I hope Cora-san's sudden change of attitude is something like a preparation for his arrival in a marine base. He should act as a marine not as a father when he is in the base. However, why does it looks like that marine is forcing the kids out of Cora-san's life? Something fishy... |
sarge1130 chapter 56 . 3/31/2018 That was a nice advice by Law for Kuina. Truly feminist! Kuina is strong but I wonder if she will travel through the seas or if the fate is still bad for her, she'll still die. |