I really like the interractions between Sai and Ino here, but this fic is a little confusing since you're (apparently) referring to a lot of stuff that happens in your other fics that are directly linked to this one. It probably worked out for people who read all of them at the pace they were updated at, but to me it feels like it doesn't work when reading just one story.

Freaking loved this fic. I’m gonna check out your other ones. I’m sad it’s being retired because you’re great with these characters.

Great chapter!

If your updating the until the day I, series again, does that mean you’re back! Cause if so IM SO SO SO EXCITED! I love the Until the day I series!

I think out of all the couples, Sai and Ino are my favorite, followed by Shikamaru and Temari. It seemed to really sneak up on them both in cannon. I love the way you are fleshing them out. Keep up the great work.

Protective Sai is so sweet! I'm excited to see how their date goes

Glad that we got closure with Kiba. Thank you.

I'm so looking forward for their date XD

"We are friends! I do not have many friends." This line made me smile. Very minor thing but there's a lot of Sai in those two sentences.

Also it's very funny imagining a guilty puppy Kiba walking into a flower shop and suddenly having three bomb-ass ninja drop kick him out of there.

I BINGE READ THIS AWESOME FIC LAST WEEK AND MOW THERE IS A NEW CHAPTER. AGWGSHHSS. BLESS YOU ;_;

I love the sai and sakura bff moment in this. And we also can see how much Sai changes from the emotionless he was before.
Great job. Kudos to you

Woah finally asfafagaggaa
Anyway thank You so much for the update. I really appreciate it.

I read this entire story in under 24 hours...

Pretty good story overall. Sai is my favorite character and I like Ino. Your interpretation of the characters/ how you write them is really good. Sai is hard to write.

The whole "Until the Day I..." thing is kind of hard to follow but this story is excellent so I will defiantly look at the other ones. Usually I don't read this kind of thing but I like this story and your writing style. It takes a lot to get an emotional reaction from a reader and Kiba destroying Shin's book gave me all kinds of feels.

Some stuff is kind of skimmed over and some parts lack depth but mostly missions which isn't really the focus of the story so I'm fine with it.

This story is rated M when it really shouldn't be (yet at least). If you didn't know, the way fanfic works makes it so M rated fics aren't on the page most people go to to look for something new to read. I personally don't care what you do but just a thought if you wanted more people to read this. It's a good story.

Anyway, nice writing style, good story, good idea behind the story, great job with the characters.

love your writings...i always enjoy it...tq for keep on writing

I really love their dymanics tho, i love flustered Sai. I also love how you narrated Sai's internal sturggles. Anyway how about Ino and Kiba's relationship tho?

The pace is a bit too fast but Thank you so much for the update