continua tu fanfic, porfavor D

I hope you update soon!

I love it! **

I'm actually kinda upset about this because I've been think about doing a story like this but with an angel instead of a merman. Still though, great story.

Please add more! You're doing so well writing this and I want to find out what happens next. The only thing I have to comment on is that you're not really getting the enough of the different personalities with the brothers. I think your're making Tsubaki a little too nice. That might be something you want to look into. But, that's a matter of opinion!

P.S. I really want to find out what's up with Miwa and how Futo will react to him.

I really like it a lot!

I like it a lot!

I like it! **

A-ano... Tsubaki-san is older than Yusuke-san... So Tsubaki-san shouldn't call Yusuke with the -nii honorific, cuz it means big brother... AND THANKS SO MUCH FOR THE UPDATE!

I am so happy that here is a new chapter. Which seems to going along nicely. I feel bad for Zuriel. Having Yusuke snap at him. But I really do like how they view home. Example being Tsubaki. Can't wait for more.

I really like it! poor Zuriel

This is the first chapter of this story and I already can tell that I will like this story. I love the description of how he looked like and his tattoo sounds so cool! Also it is neat that Zuriel seems to be pretty strong and that he has training which I think is for fighting which is awesome!
I understand that it is on hold but I am still looking to reading more! Sweet how the brothers were worried for him.

P.S. The name sounds cool;)

*makes some sort of weird noise in throat* CONTINUE! I read something like this in the Percy Jackson fandom but the author only updated like 2 chapters and it was hella disappointing, so finish this! For me? JK. UPDATE NOW!

I really like it alot! **

Nice! Interested now in the story and Zuriel's Weakness. I got the feeling the brothers are a bit OOC but hey! They'll eventually fall in love with him soooo... Ganbatte~