| Reviews for The Primordial Uzumaki |
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   ACE-135 chapter 3 . 5/3 UPDATE PLEASW |
| Borello chapter 3 . 10/23/2019 interesting idea |
| ethan.lukkar chapter 3 . 12/16/2018 Magnificent chapter can’t wait for more please update soon |
| ChronoSeth chapter 1 . 7/13/2018 I had to skim over all of that. I noticed errors. Also Naruto isn't a womanizer, for him to take all those beauties as his wife is unreal and I labelled this story as a wish-fulfilment story that is not worth the time. OP, harem, and sudden cliche. All makes this story brittle and easy to go into writers block. |
| Monster King chapter 3 . 5/30/2018 Great story I really liked it a shame that you gave up on it. |
| Fanficlover2017 chapter 3 . 2/2/2018 Good story so far! Keep up the good work and update soon please I am looking forward to seeing more. BTW, will you accept suggestions or ideas for your storyline from your readers? |
| ken chapter 3 . 1/14/2018 A-W-E-S-O-M-E just . YES |
| Natsubi chapter 2 . 8/26/2017 I will say this before i even read any further, If either Hinata or Sakura are in this 'Harem' your making, you have completely ruined this book, the idea behind it, and literally everything this book/challenge stands for |
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/11/2017 Just came to say learn grammar a little better and maybe more people will read it. And make it longer. Fix the mistakes. It's simple. |
| BlackFox987 chapter 3 . 4/9/2017 good story, hope to read the next chapter soon :) |
| thepiphasbeengobbled chapter 3 . 12/16/2016 Update again soon, please |
| chap77 chapter 2 . 8/31/2016 I I |
| DugongSeeker chapter 3 . 8/17/2016 more chapter please |
| Betrayed By Your Mind chapter 3 . 7/14/2016 fantastic young writer, truly a good story |
| AzureSoulReaper chapter 3 . 7/14/2016 i think its great already |
